Reviews for 1Stirrings
Emufeather chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Liked the story very much. There's not enough slash for Kings. Great idea, well presented. The story flowed and was interesting, and most importantly it had good spelling. The only thing is you need to use a bit more punctuation. Sometimes your sentences weren't clear because of a lack of punctuation. Other than that, well done. It was a good read and I encourage you to keep writing.