Reviews for Showers
Fairygirl24 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
i really liked this story.
PotterDragon chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Id love to see a story out of this
Twilightfans chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
holy fuck, that was hott!
WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This was your first true smut scene? Dude! I am so envious! My first didnt turn out this good! *cries* no fair! *snicker* i like it though...it was hot!...yay for Snape and his mind powers! *snickers*
Neeshack chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Wow! Fantastic. I love it. . . More . . . please!
missisaac charlotte chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
wow you wouldnt think that was your first smutt story it was very well done :D
lastcrazyhorn chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
*sings happily*

Smutty smutty smutty smut.
cattastroppe101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
awesome write more
clexfan chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
wow! super hot
ForgottenTales chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Ooh, I wonder what Sev's point of view would be, considering he can read Harry's thoughts. Though.. I thought Legimency required eye contact?

Loved the smut scene.. Somehow showers are the perfect setting. And massages as foreplay.
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
That's what he gets for listening in on Harry's naughty smutty mind! Lol oh no, now he'll never learn his lesson! Haha
readingReality chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
i liked it
ketsuekilover chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
i loved it i just wish it wasn't a one-shot _
lillie andrews chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
um wow

that was amazing

and i prefer my smut to have more of a plot

so seriously that was nice :)

You should definatly add a few more chapters

like what happened that night or like skip a few weeks when Ron and Herminoe get suspicious

:D

lots of love

lillie
krtn-ise chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
wow this was great there is no way this was your first smut scene
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