Reviews for The Door In The Dark
Debbie White chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
oh my god please finish this story! you are such a good writer!
wendy1969 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I know from experience how it feels. i still have moments, even now. when a complete stranger is near i fight an inner battle to stay where i am or to keep walking the path i am walking. it took forever to talk to and eventually get with my hubby in the beginning. But anyway, i just wish to say thankyou for being sensitive in how you approached the topic.
Rosalissa3 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
that was...AWESOME! THIS STORY IS SOOOO GOOD! GREAT EMOTION! I LOVED IT!
momomegm chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
this story is awesome please continue it! i will be one reading it :)
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
A great story. Very well written.
CullenHathaway chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wait. Ur talking about wen those men from the dress store were the ones who raped her? Tht was in forks. So how can she be with her mother ? I'm confuzzled Anyway. Update again but could u like explain why she is wif her ma
identicahl chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
thats really good!
love109 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
is this story finished? if not then plz update wen u can. it would be nice for her to be happy again :D
Zelda Maximus chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Sucks that Bella got raped but Damn! This is a really good fic. You're very good at decribing emotions. Right on!
marsbareater12 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I lioke this! Its good!
Feenrai chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Wow, that was very good. It was so...real. I've been there, sadly, and that was a very realistic description. I hope you haven't learned from experience, but if you have, I hope you've begun the healing process. I wish this weren't a one-shot...I'd love to see a happy ending to this, to watch her grow and heal, and become a stronger woman perhaps, or at least gain an Alice or Edward to confide in and gain comfort from.
JustRenesmee chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Wow that was intense. Nice job..

Tash
beckyabc2 chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
WOW THAT WAS AMAZING, I REALLY LOVE THE STORY!, YOURE AMAZING AND I THINK I LOVE EVERYTHING THAT YOU WRITE!
fanpire4000 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Wow, that was amazing. I am so sorry if you had to go through any of that. That's horrible. :( Just wondering where Edward was in this? I would have thought that he would be there to comfort Bella... Amazing job, Ori.
mamy007 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
ouhou ! that was so... dark ! very different of your usual writing (sorry, I'm not American, I wrote my words as they came). But the feelings were there.. thinks. but for the next OS, please, write something, more, heu... light ? I always love your way of writing anyway !
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