|Reviews for Dark Jewel|
| simba5waldo5 chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
I know i said i wouldnt read this, but i did. It was great. Loved b/j/f action. Liked the ending. Great job. Glad j did get a sort of hea. Melissa
| APL chapter 14 . 11/1/2012
yummy! enjoyed it!
| foreverjasperskitten chapter 14 . 6/16/2012
Wow ladies! Great sequel! Both stories are so well written and completely enthralling! My favorite part of Dark Jewels last chapter is right there at the end. What you did for Jasper was just beautiful!
Usually I'm not an Alice fan. I tend to shy away from Jasper/Bella pairings. In these two fics though I liked her character a lot.
Your so very talented writers here. I look forward to reading more from you!
Much love your way,
| janosch73 chapter 14 . 6/5/2012
What a beautiful ending for this story.
| janosch73 chapter 10 . 6/4/2012
Holy shit what Emmett and Edward both did! That sure was a surprise.
| janosch73 chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
I'm so glad Bella's virginity wasn't lost through rape.
| janosch73 chapter 3 . 6/2/2012
Need to continue tomorrow.
| heyjued chapter 14 . 4/21/2012
Pretty good fucking story.
| wendy williams chapter 14 . 1/10/2012
I dont usually review, but I had to say I loved how you gys ended this story wth Jasper and Alice. It brought terars to my eyes. That was just sweet how he stayed to watch over everyone and got to know of his son and Alice got to say good bye to him. Thank you and keep up the awesome work!
| cbzoo chapter 14 . 12/23/2011
this was not as good as the last two, The last two chaps of Dark Salvation got weird and this alternate alternate universe was a little stranger. But I still enjoy your writing, you do it well and not everyone will LOVE everything but I am sure you do it as much for yourself as others
| StylinDa chapter 14 . 6/6/2011
Jasper holds a place in my heart :) gotta admit, shed a couple of tears at the ending but again, a excellent story :D
| Brandy chapter 14 . 5/8/2011
Thank you all so much for this story. While I have read plenty of good fics on here, none has kept my attention like this one. I laughed, I cheered them on, I hurt for them, and I cried. Wonderful character devolpment. I am amazed that two seperate women were able to complete this story. It is so finely interwoven, that at some point, you must have come togeather as one. I'm speechless, and so very proud of you all, and will be awaiting more in the future... come on ladies... one more good ''mindFUCK'' please, i'll be a good girl, I promise.
| moonhoney2 chapter 14 . 3/13/2011
Compared to the first story, I was rather disappointed in this one. It seemed rushed. Like you were just going thru the motions to get it completed. It didn't really match up to the first one very well. I guess I expected it to be darker, like the first one.
Also, I could swear that earlier in the story, it was said that Bella and James were sent to Aro after Maria died. But then there she was in the end, resurrected. And Bella talked about being with Jasper in those kennels at Aro's but I thought they were together at Maria's. And Jasper died at Maria's. I could be wrong. I didn't remember where that part was and wasn't going to go back and read it all again.
There were a few other things that didn't seem right. There seemed to be too much freedom for the "slaves". Like them being able to get out of the kennels on their own. And Emmett being able to come and go (even tho I know he wasn't a slave, but it didn't make sense why he wasn't). And the whole Jake thing.
And when the alarm was sounded at the end, yet most of the top people were still in their rooms doing whatever they were doing like all was ok. I expected more of a response to that.
I don't know. I guess if I hadn't read the first story, I would have liked it more. But I remember the characters being colder, meaner, more evil in the first one.
| CRAZYCARE4 chapter 14 . 1/27/2011
I loved dark jewel and I most definitely loved dark salvation. You guys are very talented writers. The only part I didn't like was felix's involvement with Edward and Bella but I'm a Edward/Bella only fan. It was great thank you
| rubell chapter 12 . 1/24/2011
i like the 'rambo' idea but thank you for not having him strap a red thing on his head! ugh, i hate that cliche now!