Reviews for Predators
YumeMori chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I have to say that I am very interested and entertained by this story. I normally don't read too many stories that use OCs prominently because they're usually not done very well, but this has promise.

Your OC is very interesting. It almost seems like she has some good makings of a future villain. I really enjoyed the conversation between her and Yamamoto, especially when she said she was afraid of herself. It has the beginnings of a good personal plot point for her.
AliceinWonderland chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
You're 30!