|Reviews for Two No More|
| PoisonBones chapter 26 . 4/25
This is amazing, and I love it. You have portrayed the characters very well, and despite your seeming lack of confidence in earlier notes, you write Aang and Katara perfectly. Miyako and Ryuhito are beautiful and adorable even through writing. Lan is amazing and despite being a hardcore shipper of the Hakoda/Ursa pairing I absolutely adore Nauja, she is a wonderful person for Hakoda, even though she didn't appear for long in the story. It's beatiful, keep writing, you are amazing at it :)
| RavenxRobin chapter 26 . 3/6
| DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 25 . 8/31/2012
| MetalGod14 chapter 26 . 8/30/2012
I just want to say that you have a gift for writing. Every story I have read of yours is captivating, well thought out and executed with your own writers voice. And that writers voice is interesting and very balanced. Thanks for writing. :)
| DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 22 . 8/30/2012
in this chapter you say that mai pliats her hair into two 'thick' plaits when in another chapter you said something about her hair being thin?
| DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 18 . 8/30/2012
| Slytherin Snow Queen chapter 26 . 8/29/2012
I love your stories so much, this was a great read! In response to the heir thing, I know that if you're trying to stay close to cannon, Zuko hands the throne over to his daughter, the current Firelord in Legend of Korra. If that doesn't matter, then it depends on how you interpret it- you're the author, after all :)
| WAANG chapter 26 . 8/25/2012
Just finished reading the whole story, I LOVED IT! I am tremendously amazed of how you put everything together! MAIKO FOREVER33 Love this couple and I'm a fan of your stories! Can't wait to read moree! :DDD
| ncisgirl96 chapter 25 . 8/11/2012
fantastic writing as always
| Skylar chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I have not read ...I am now
| FairladyZ2005 chapter 9 . 6/27/2012
That did go better than expected for Mai and her parents. I'm sad Iroh's leaving but I'm looking forward to Sokka and Suki now.
| FairladyZ2005 chapter 8 . 6/27/2012
Naming ceremony was neat. And I do like that Mai and her mother are going to at least try to work things out.
| FairladyZ2005 chapter 7 . 6/27/2012
Sweet chapter and I like the names for the kids. it's nice to see everyone helping out and Chung with the babies was great moment. I also loved Zuko in the council room. He is indeed not his father and these children will have a loving family.
| FairladyZ2005 chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
Loved the clashing uncles, Zuko keeps it together fairly well, and Toph is just plain evil.
| FairladyZ2005 chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
I really like seeing how Mai and Toph interact.
And the line "We do it outside too." TMI Zuko, embarassingly adorkable.