Reviews for Two No More
onceuponaminute chapter 1 . 4/9
i really loved and enjoyed reading this through. you did a great job!
Guest chapter 17 . 8/2/2017
What a sweet story. You really know how to get a family picture in and let all that love and joy be expressed freely. Its such a pleasure to come across this story.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/20/2017
I knew itttt! I knew they were having twins! XD
missmangotree999 chapter 17 . 4/13/2017
Please write some more!
Hailey chapter 24 . 11/16/2016
I died while reading this chapter
Anon chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
...exactly how did toph write a letter?
Kagamine Arimonori chapter 26 . 7/29/2015
While reading your story, I noticed that you talk about Miyako more than you do Ryuhito.
Don't get me wrong, your story is amazing, but I was wondering why you didn't really expand on Ryuhito gives me the impression that Zuko and Mai don't care about him much (Even though I know they do). And if this opinion of mine is wrong, I probably didn't read it carefully enough (which I think I did.)
Omg chapter 9 . 6/20/2015
U named the kid after a japaneese restaurant
PoisonBones chapter 26 . 4/25/2015
This is amazing, and I love it. You have portrayed the characters very well, and despite your seeming lack of confidence in earlier notes, you write Aang and Katara perfectly. Miyako and Ryuhito are beautiful and adorable even through writing. Lan is amazing and despite being a hardcore shipper of the Hakoda/Ursa pairing I absolutely adore Nauja, she is a wonderful person for Hakoda, even though she didn't appear for long in the story. It's beatiful, keep writing, you are amazing at it :)
RavenxRobin chapter 26 . 3/6/2015
DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 25 . 8/31/2012
amazing amazing!
MetalGod14 chapter 26 . 8/30/2012
I just want to say that you have a gift for writing. Every story I have read of yours is captivating, well thought out and executed with your own writers voice. And that writers voice is interesting and very balanced. Thanks for writing. :)
DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 22 . 8/30/2012
in this chapter you say that mai pliats her hair into two 'thick' plaits when in another chapter you said something about her hair being thin?
DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 18 . 8/30/2012
amazingley good!
Slytherin Sato chapter 26 . 8/29/2012
I love your stories so much, this was a great read! In response to the heir thing, I know that if you're trying to stay close to cannon, Zuko hands the throne over to his daughter, the current Firelord in Legend of Korra. If that doesn't matter, then it depends on how you interpret it- you're the author, after all :)
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