|Reviews for Trapt by the Echo|
| Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
| puasluoma chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I loved it up untill the point they started to have sex...
It was.. Ok but...
Out of the nowhere, pointless and... Just too soon and too wrong
| Emily chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
poor Eddie. Good story
| babygirlmills chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
omg i love this story u so should contine omg i lov it i lov it i lov it
| emmettismymonkeyman chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I love to see stories like this, involving a female who gets like beat, cause it's the normal way to go, but with a boy, it's different, but still good. It was a good thing to read, though i wish it was better. I think it would be a great love story, and i am gonna add this to my community. :) see you around...
| LoveThoseTopazEyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
You should totally make this a full on story. I know I would deffiantly read it. Please make it a story that would be so awesome 3
| crackupmonkey chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Great one shot - Keep up the writing
| Marianka chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
So emotional,cute,i like it.:)
| OtherMe chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
This story is really good, but there are a few editing errors that should be addressed. Each new person who talks needs to have their own paragraph and there are a few vowels missing here and there. (I usually have at least two rewrites on the stories under my other name). I really like the way you created believable characters and situations, it takes talent to write like this. Nice work.
| XxvampvixxenxX chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
i like it