Reviews for Trapt by the Echo
Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
puasluoma chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I loved it up untill the point they started to have sex...

It was.. Ok but...

Out of the nowhere, pointless and... Just too soon and too wrong

Keep writing
Emily chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
poor Eddie. Good story
babygirlmills chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
omg i love this story u so should contine omg i lov it i lov it i lov it
emmettismymonkeyman chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I love to see stories like this, involving a female who gets like beat, cause it's the normal way to go, but with a boy, it's different, but still good. It was a good thing to read, though i wish it was better. I think it would be a great love story, and i am gonna add this to my community. :) see you around...
LoveThoseTopazEyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
You should totally make this a full on story. I know I would deffiantly read it. Please make it a story that would be so awesome 3

crackupmonkey chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Great one shot - Keep up the writing
Marianka chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
So emotional,cute,i like it.:)
OtherMe chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
This story is really good, but there are a few editing errors that should be addressed. Each new person who talks needs to have their own paragraph and there are a few vowels missing here and there. (I usually have at least two rewrites on the stories under my other name). I really like the way you created believable characters and situations, it takes talent to write like this. Nice work.
QueenElsaSalvatore chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
i like it