|Reviews for The Perfect Woman|
| 242729 chapter 5 . 9/27
About the name, you mention at the start you realised before publication the connections that name has and as it was not directly addressed would have been a simple matter of 'search and replace' before publication, and then to also give her psychic abilities (even if weak), cannot just make everyone in the Verse psychic...
There are really far too many parts that are sharp edges and pointy corners digging into my mind as wrong to let me enjoy this story, guess at this point I am reading based on the promise of chapter one rather than anything else.
| 242729 chapter 3 . 9/27
Asking for baby gender suggestions...
I would like to see Zoe have a girl, far too often she is written with a boy. But considering I am four years late judging by dates I am preparing to be disappointed in the next chapter.
| RiverQueen chapter 1 . 9/9
Omgggg, this chapter was sooooo good! I need more of this goodness between Mal & River
| hmm chapter 10 . 5/6/2014
A tad long winded in the description but other then that loved it... Kinda wanted to see River pregnant would have rocked.
| Slayitalldown chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
It's a good story but the author notes and homework at the bottom killed it for me, I couldn't read anymore which is a bit annoying. I know trying to get feedback is a bitch but honestly, as a reader, I just want to READ a good story uninterrupted. I don't see the harm in using AN's at the last chapter AFTER the story and editing them out when you post new ones but the top and bottom is too much. Sorry, but I couldn't finish. Pity, it was good!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
loved it! :) eager for next chapter.
| karin.vaught chapter 10 . 2/11/2013
| moonlightkiss1515 chapter 10 . 12/3/2012
awww! i love it! it was great!
| gonekrazy3000 chapter 10 . 11/19/2012
I need more so bad D:
Pretty sure i will get withdrawal symptoms
If you dont post more of this story...
| Dudtheman chapter 10 . 7/6/2012
"Everyone's a hero in their own way. Everyone's got villains they must face. They're not as cool as mine, but folks you know it's fine to know your place." omg lol awsome )
| Dudtheman chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
| PadawanCassy chapter 10 . 7/4/2012
Your story was really good, are you gonna make a sequel too it?
| Shakespoe chapter 10 . 5/3/2012
This was an awesome story... I really love your writing style! You're an incredibly talented author, and I hope you keep writing :)
| Sliver of Melody chapter 10 . 4/9/2012
This was awesome, I loved it
| XxDeathStarxX chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
That was a very good and funny ending! Poor Mal :D I also wonder if River ever got to the dancing part in the first scene. lol