Reviews for Heroes Never Die
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 9 . 2/13
This was good. loved the rolling pin bit. And Melina. I like her to bad she married though. She seems like she can stand up to Neal and is good at reading him.
PastOneonta chapter 9 . 11/6/2016
This was fast moving with a great Neal and Peter. Elizabeth was excellent from the beginning too, and again when she was mad at Peter for not wanting to help Neal. The twists were very good and Melina fighting for her sister was a big surprise. Looking forward to seeing if you continued.
cosette141 chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
OMGGG! THIS IS SO GOOD! and hysterical hahahhaa
Garrett chapter 9 . 8/16/2014
I like it continue...
Nadamalki chapter 9 . 5/22/2014
There are so many great fanfictions out there, but they rarely wrap it up in an unforgettable ending, yours was. You entwined the emotions Neal was going in each chapter like maestro and then wrapped it up in the most cutest bundle of words from Peter on how heroes never die...

Then you got me on panic mode once again with the sequel! You're gonna kill me!
Olympus97 chapter 9 . 2/21/2014
SEQUEL!
wotumba1 chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
wow, so that was melina's incentive after all...

good story!
wotumba1 chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
no!
wotumba1 chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
gotta love melina
wotumba1 chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
guess he can't...
wotumba1 chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
let's just hope that peter listens to his wife...
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
what? no!
HAMUCHA chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
Nice Elizabeth. Nice Melina.
HAMUCHA chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
Stupid Peter.
He was like those moron in love story that couldn't express his gratitude and effection and instead acting like asshole because he can't believe his own feeling and can't believe some one would care for him.
HAMUCHA chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Why so confused Peter. Neal isn't a bad guy. You kmow that.
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