Reviews for Inside the Chapel
Netbug009 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
OUCH. ;_; Yeah, I agree that this isn't your best work, but the ending sure punched me in the heart.
Rebecca chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Ok...moodkilled...i was all excited for the wedding...but othereise great story...written very well
ILoveAnimeVeryMuch123 chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
It was good until that last line. I didn't get it at all. Wait... Did Chiro die?
Fastern chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
FINALLY the error messages stopped plaguing me! Now I can review this!

I thought it was epic.

It was really quite the clever oneshot. You establish this whole thing about Chiro and Jinmay getting married, and then you find out Jinmay’s attending her fiance’s funeral! It was so incredibly ironic that I had to read the last line over and OVER again until it fully hit me! Your narrative still needs a bit of tweaking, but you so got the idea of using plot twists to your advantage! WONDERFUL! I give this a complete thumbs-up!