|Reviews for All I Have To Give A Ben 10 Fan Fic|
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/13
it hurts how ben is treated
| mia chapter 1 . 1/12
i liked the first part but didn't like the part for when ben gets kidnapped
| Mechamech-Leviathen chapter 14 . 5/23/2013
how exactly is this a romance and adventure story if the real Ben ends up dying a martyr unjustly, his child taken, his family and girlfriend forsaking him, i did not see any real blooming romance either, i would change it into an angst story, or do something with the ending, kinda made me sad that Ben died the way he did and it seems to leave a lot of unresolved issues, i was hoping for a happy ending, oh well...
| Thalia's Royal King chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
| beatrice-waterworks chapter 14 . 12/31/2010
Just two words to you. Pure genius.
| MyFruitloop chapter 14 . 6/28/2010
uh, so who's the real ben. The story was good when it started out and now i'm just confused. It really got wierd when ben turned into a girl or would that be imposter ben. And then it didn't make any sence as to why you spent the entire begining of the story telling what happened to imposter ben because thats not the real Ben. Unless that's the real ben but you never say.
Is it supposed to be my opinion of wether or not it's ben. I just don't get it.
Don't say i have to read the sequel to find out because it's probably just as confusing. Just tell me who the real ben is.
Ps. owen is cute character at least at first.
Sincerly confused MFL
| Saiyura chapter 14 . 6/15/2010
I am so lost at this ending! I mean... O.o What! Kevin is in the null void... and... o o... Ben... I... Tena... I am so lost and I love this XD I hope you have a sequel or something. XD Love it
| Serlenia chapter 14 . 6/7/2010
Okay, this is the first time in a long time that I've cried like this. they better find out who he is. I can't believe you had Tena/ben die...
| flour-chan xXx SSS chapter 14 . 3/7/2010
omg i'm really crying omg the real ben isn't really dead is he oh god please say he isn't -brakes down and cries- oh i do hope u do a sequel and i really hope with all my heart that the real ben isn't but if he is please revive him _
| mangamoo1 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I like it so far v This should be a good read!
| xXCHAZYWOOXx chapter 14 . 12/18/2009
Oh... I am so confussed! did ben-tena die? ...is he/she coming back? as a he or a she? and who was that other ben? ...sounded just like albedo? is it? oh this is so confussing! i hate gwen now! HATE HER! ...and was i sensing a little bevin action?...and bwen?...oh please answer me!
| starvision89 chapter 14 . 12/4/2009
OMG i cant beleive you did that it was totally unexpected what is going to happen when they find out that they killed the real ben and kevin was right! This puts a totally different spin on what happened in the future OMG i think i'm in shock.
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 13 . 12/3/2009
THERE WE GO, THIS WAS A NICE CHAPTER... SORT OF... GRAMMERWISE, BUT I'M STILL GETTING CREPED OUT,
| sharpieufp chapter 13 . 12/3/2009
Haha! oops...I accidentally uploaded the first chapter as chapter thirteen. It's fixed now. Chapter thirteen is up.
| chop4tess chapter 13 . 12/3/2009
Please forgive me if I am asking a stupid question, but why did you post chapter 1 again as chapter 13? Was it just a mistake or was it there to remind us how Ben got kidnapped?
I forgot to review chp12 so I'll say something now, I loved the plot twist with the other Ben. Really good idea. I hope Kevin and Owen get Tenna to safety. I know that the other Ben is a fake and I hope Gwen and Julie (If you killed her I wouldn't be upset, just so you know *evil grin*) figure it out soon.