|Reviews for Pain and Loyalty Rev|
| Fanofallthingsdarkandmagical chapter 38 . 1/24
Though the chapters were you dont have a beta can be hard and a bit of a struggle to read. I am enjoying this story very much. I understand English isn't your first language which is why without the beta some of you chapters a difficult to read. But not impossible and that is amazing. I think you have done a awesome job on this story and should be very proud of it. I can't wait to see how and even if Dean can ever have a relationship with the man that has ruined his life. Who has taken away any chance Dean has to ever have a family of his own or to possible ever meet a girl . Not to mention the physical abuse and mental abuse alone. But for a FATHER to take away their sons 'manhood' and ability to ever be a 'proper male' in the respect of being able to pleasure a women or gain pleasure from sex himself seems pretty unforgivable. I hope Dean dose move on for his own mental health but I don't really see who Dean can forgive him. But anyway like I said this is an amazingly sad and cruel world you've built and Dean has really gone through the definition of what suffering is. I hope him and cruel have a confrontation and Dean comes out the Victor over the sociopathic disk. Anyway lol love this story and can not wait for another update. And though I'm not the best Grammer or spelling person here if u ever need another beta in case electric dream is unavailable just pm me. :)
| Gina chapter 27 . 12/14/2013
Ola sua história é bonita mas pelo amor de Deus chega de fazer o Dean sofrer pra que este capítulo que coisa horrível. ?..
| babyreaper chapter 38 . 10/5/2013
Very intense chapter, Dean finally let all his anger and hatred for his father come to the surface and it almost resulted in John's death. But will that have made the difference, now that everything is out in the open, can Dean and John finally get past what was done to him and look to a better future? Thanks for updating
| mandancie chapter 38 . 10/5/2013
oh wow! this was really good! :) I am so happy you've updated this story! :)
| Wow chapter 37 . 6/22/2013
I love hurt Dean and sick Dean! I'm hoping you can maybe make Dean sick and John will be very worried as Dean weakEns in his arms! Great story!
| mandancie chapter 37 . 5/18/2013
oh my goodness! I started reading this and I couldn't stop! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
| mandancie chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
I just found your story! This is really good! :) it might take me a while to read all of this but I wanted to let you know that so far I am enjoying this story! :)
| jenny chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
Damn! Dean really went through hell while he was at John's
i agree with your other readers about Castiel
well done there
| sarah chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
you did great as always
its good to know that Cas will be gone soon, he is so much an intruder here
| sarah chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
glad you will take Castiel away, he doesn't fit here, i agree with your other readers about that
i personally like him in the show , but he is no longer good for this story
| babyreaper chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
Fantastic seeing another chapter, but not a happy one for Dean, at least he has yet to encounter Cruel, I know John is doing his best, but a few months for being nice can't wipe away 8 years of cruelty and torture, I wish Dean would c-go back with Castiel, he was happy there, with Ellen and Bobby. Thanks for updating.
| IrumaAckleschia chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
aaack.. So short... Too much flashback, and maybe you need to mark when flashback is on and off. Sorry for my rambling, thx for updating. Next, please?
| B2F chapter 36 . 5/5/2013
update ! update ! update ! :) please
| MagaliMyriamBaglioGosset chapter 37 . 5/7/2013
Like I said before : I really really love all you write !.
I will read the next part of your other stories and try to let a review to you... 3
| IrumaAckleschia chapter 36 . 5/5/2013
OMG, can't believe it! you've update this fic and i dunno about it. Big thanks though... And i want more John/Dean moment. How he's g0nna fix this.. Update more and asap :D