|Reviews for Infirmed|
| spacegypsy1 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Great! Nice look into both characters and well done and entertaining.I really enjoyed this. b
| campylobacter chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Ooh, I've never considered the possibilities of a Vala/Carolyn pairing. Genius! Love the way you give a slice of verisimilitude to each character's reaction to Vala's injury.
Typo: "Teal’c had appropriated what seemed like very pillow on base" should be "every pillow".
Grammar: "now lied discarded on the floor" should be "now lay discarded on the floor". (Past tense of "lie" is irregular.)
| acer-sigma chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Nice little story! Excellent way for a friendship to start between Vala and Carolyn.
Hope you consider expanding on this idea at some point.