Reviews for A Whole World, Bit by Bit
AlexandraKelly chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
This is a great story! I loved it - excellent capture of both Sam and Josh. Insightful look into the Sam/Josh relationship. :)
HarmonyLover chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
I've said this to you in a PM, but I wanted to leave an actual review for others. This one-shot has some of the most wonderful imagery in it - you make Sam so real just through Josh's thoughts, just through the images Josh is seeing in his head, that I could cry. It's so lovely. A gorgeous rendition of Sam and Josh's relationship, beautiful and poignant.
Ecri chapter 1 . 11/17/2009

I think this is the best line I've read in fiction (fanfiction or otherwise) in a long time...If Sam gave people too much credit, then there was a studied brutality to what Josh did; a misjudgement of the extent to which people were bad.

Wonderful phrasing.

Your word choice throughout was perfect. It seemed so very West Wing, and it painted a good picture of Josh's state of mind at the time and of the way he thinks of Sam and of himself. This was in essence a short character study of Josh and you did a stellar job!