Reviews for Come To Daddy
TeeLee123 chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
This was a cute story )
I liked how brutal Chichi was towards Sharpener & I'm glad she didn't return his feelings. I liked Sharpener's pig headed stupidity, he kept the story funny. Gohan's innocence was adorable when he fainted. The gay jumper was unexpectedly funny, but at least Gohan got a kiss out of it. The circumstances leading to the kiss & all of Gohan's pent up attraction towards Videl is what made it my fave scene of the story.
LadyLaide chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
XD Sad to see this come to an end but this was a lovely read! So funny! :P And whilst I despise happy happy endings, this one was cute and well deserved!

The gay guy was 110% haha and yet another nice threat :3 Who knew writing could be funny funny and not just cheesy funny XD

Nicely done _
LadyLaide chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
Oh gawd XD Got me laughing to the point where I was choking hahahaha! Man Sharpner is hilarious lololol! That is a legendary track :P

I loved the Videl & Chichi fight and their retorts XD So funny haha and the team knockout was (Y) :D

I was beginning to wonder where Goten was but all was solved in this chappy :P I just think it was adorable how he's so clueless yet grasped the situation faster than Gohan XD

LadyLaide chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
XD Hahahahaha poor Sharpner! Honestly when he told Gohan to call him 'Daddy' I just couldn't take it LOL! XD

I wonder what his next move will be lololol
LadyLaide chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
X_X Sharpner and...Chichi *facepalm* This kid really is looking for a dominant woman XD

Yet another hilarious chapter XD I just loved what Chichi's influence brought to this! Ain't nothing like a mother's touch lololol and the raincoat part was priceless!

And I have to say, Gohan's Mum isn't the only one who would beat him into a coma if he talked back XD hahahaha!

Absolutely love the threats! MSV wherever you're hiding, you are a legend! _
LadyLaide chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This was soooooo funny! I absolutely loved it! The porn scene just had me in stitches lolol

I could totally imagine everything happening as I read it, very entertaining all the way through :)

Gohan is such a cutie! _ So innocent :P or is he? XD
withoutwingsx chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
Oh my god, I laughted soooo hard!
dbz fan chapter 2 . 9/8/2011
chapter 2 was the funny thing i ever read .
Testsigma66 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
XD Xp ϋ :3 ;) LOL OMG HAHA
KawaiiKilala77 chapter 5 . 2/3/2011
Oh my God! This is the most funniest DBZ fanfic I had ever read. It had so many funny parts that I can't even write it in here because there's too many of them. Awesome fic!
The0Blind0Writer chapter 5 . 1/12/2011
lol, HILARIOUS! but after reading about the gay man, I'd have thought that the gay man would target Sharpner next as the story's resolution, lol. i wonder if gohan was the one to help fly sharpner up to the flagpole?
zfj chapter 5 . 10/28/2010
Hahahahah! That was hilarious! It was rather strange but a great read. I absolutely loved the line

" Luckily, there was an inviting puddle of mud close by. If Kami was generous, both women would fall into it and tear each other's clothes off. Mud Wrestling was such a great sport."

Why haven't I seen this fic before! Well done, loved it.
Shadowhunter536 chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
good story
LouisaMB chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
That was very interesting. Sharpner is such a... i don't even know what to call him. Maybe, a horrible womanizer? lol
Phlogistics chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
This story was so much fun to read. Thank you for writing this!
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