Reviews for Blue Eyes
anonomos chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
good, could hav bin longer i wz jst gettin interested would definatly read any other stories you post.
V.W. Norton chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Brilliant! Your description of Archer (oops, my bad, YOUNG GANGSTER) is absolutely perfect. I can just see Freddie being perplexed by his new recruit...

"His eyes met the blonds and held their gaze. Neither man flinched, simply stared back, challenging each other to break off first. A smile began to form on the blonde’s face, lips curling up at the corner of his lips." *shivers in delight*

[I'm sorry this review is quite a time after you posted the story. I had the flu... NOT bacon disease thankfully but my sincere apologies for not being on top of things.]

And I do hope you continue this story... I can't wait to read more.
TwistedKat chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Sounds like a good start, hope you get more up soon :-)