i loved this story:)

Great story and song I read it before and thought it was a touching story. I read it again while listening to the song and I was moved and ended up with tears. Great job and keep at it.

That was a brilliant story. It made me so sad, because I like those two and furthermore if Takumi dies, Mai will cry and that would make me sad too. But I know even in that case, Mai would try to comfort Akira, like she did in this story.

Please write more stories like this. I don't mean necessarily sad stories about those two, but I mean stories with this style. It felt so real and serious. I'm looking forward to it! Hm!

Wow, that was really sad. You know, I had never heard the song "Love Lives On" before,

but after reading the story the first time, I looked it up and listened to it while then

reading it a second time. The song really compliments your story, making it all the

more moving and touching. Nicely done.