|Reviews for Echoes of the Second Hand|
| JustARead chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Not at all what I was expecting :)
| RunsfromReality chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Oh, you got me with this one! I thought it was Alice right up until the end!
| Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I thought this was Alice right until the end. Poor Esme having gone through so much, but at least she has sexy Carlisle now. great story xx
| futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Almost throughout the whole story I thought it was about Alice! With the dreamlike premonitions and such. I only thought of Esme when she was about to jump from the roof.
This story is written very well, and beautiful. That said, it wasn't my favorite out of your stories I've read. It's not your fault, I think it has something to do with the genre. But since you wrote it, I thought I'd give it a chance :)
| squibstitcher chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
you write such pretty words. This was brilliant! _
| MaleficentKnits chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
first of all, sweetie... thank you for entering the LFN contest as I know that writing dark is not your usual style...
what can I say… you always enthrall me with your beautifully written words. the darkness comes this time from inside our dark lady and is self-inflicted... though Esme seeks help from her family she is only made to suffer more… had to say I didn’t figure it was Esme until the she found comfort holding her fellow inmate in the institution and had her first peaceful, pain free night of dreamless sleep only to have the girl taken away. Then the pain and suffering comes back thricefold… lovely story of a misery-filled life. sneaky little minx!
| chef diamond heart chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
How absolutely chilling! I'm reminded of the Virginia Woolf story' 'The Yellow Wallpaper' (something like that, anyway) by which I mean high praise... CDH
| mon-ange22 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
wow, that was so cool! i liked how the characters were ambiguous so you weren't sure who they were until nearly the end. great job!
| SweetDulcinea chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Poor thing ( Her entire life was torture. Well, at least she gets Sexy Doctor Come-Fuck-Me for eternity! Great writing, sweetie!
| MilitzaG chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
OMG CRAZINESS! Is the little friend Alice? i thought the whole time it was Bella! wow you have right and thoroughly mindeffed me good job!1
| NelsonSmandela chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Oh, oh I LOVE this one! I was very riveted reading it, and I ache for Esme's despair. Thank you so much for writing it! _
| lambcullen chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Oh. My. Wow!
all the way through I thought Alice... mainly b/c its you, right? WOW! PERFECT! Damn... I'm kinda lost for words, and you know that doesn't happen often.
Christ... Wow... ILY!
| aabbccd chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
| wuogkat chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Not what I expected. :-) I spent the whole time imagining Alice.
| polyphany chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
That was awesome! Dark Carlisle and dark Esme rule!