Reviews for Beloved on this Earth
bunika chapter 23 . 8/19
poor Sev
bunika chapter 16 . 8/17
I am glad they understand each other
bunika chapter 14 . 8/16
they are cute
bunika chapter 13 . 8/16
someone is jealous
bunika chapter 12 . 8/16
poor Sev
bunika chapter 7 . 8/15
why didn't she go to Hogwarts
bunika chapter 6 . 8/15
maybe she changed her name
bunika chapter 2 . 8/11
I feel for you Lois
bunika chapter 1 . 8/11
poor Harry I hope he gets well sy
Guest chapter 30 . 12/26/2021
good story
riverrat1 chapter 30 . 6/9/2021
This is a wonderful story. I like the way it started and how Lois found out that she was a witch. I like stories when Severus finds love. He was still a little grumpy at first but slowly but surely learned to relax a little.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/4/2021
What a strange and slightly gross title for a chapter of a Harry Potter fanfic.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/4/2021
Isn't it odd how Albus AMAZINGLY never happens to be around to hear when his li'l buddy Mad Eye harasses Severus? Quite handy, that.
Alm.Tree chapter 8 . 3/9/2021
super minor but it would have been O levels in the 80s/90s, not A levels yetstill just as nasty tho
Alm.Tree chapter 4 . 3/9/2021
just want to let you know how bloody irritating it is that the text is centred, pls fix it. otherwise i like it so far
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