|Reviews for Beloved on this Earth|
| Sailor Wade chapter 9 . 2/17/2002
Awwwww! Next part! PWEEEEZE! It's so good to see another Snape romance out there!
I love the name Achelois [is that how you spell it? I didn't look back, i just guessed] But how do you pronounce the mother's brother's name?
| surlyse chapter 9 . 2/15/2002
Great Story, you really are an excellent story teller. Hope you keep writing, and once again, great story!
| Dauphin chapter 9 . 2/14/2002
I agree with the birthday presents part! Do update soon...and finally, we see Lois's other, quite...playful part...
Well - that means she's not a Mary-Sue! After all...we already saw her first weakness in the first chapter.
Do hurry! Can't wait...I check this story EVERY DAY.
| arcee1 chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
Great story i like how it is coming together please post soon .
| K. H. T chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
this is really good... even if i never read chapter 3... i didnt miss anything really important did i? i gather that Snape came to the Dursely's, and they werent happy about it.. but.. ooo stupid parental controls, they never did that before... why did they have to start now...
| Rosmerta chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
Yay, another chapter! I'm sure Lois will make a great mediwitch. I can't wait to see her start classes. And picturing Snape without his robes & nothing underneath them... hee hee...
| sara chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
i love this story! Keep up the great work and post the next chatper soon!
| Tyger-chan chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
Aw, I love it! Very smooth- the story flows along with that masterful pace that only really good writers achieve. Keep it up, please, I'll be watching for more!
| alice chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
Yeah I like it so far keep writing lets see what develops between those two and what will happen to her.
| c b chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
funny! this is great! keep on!
| Lataradk chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
"Snape looked merely puzzled by her long gaze and eventually turned away to pour himself a glass of water, but not before giving her the kind of wary look generally reserved for the very old or very simple." LOL! I can't help it, suddenly this image of Snape working as a nurse in a home for old people popped up in my head! Then came the poker player and Lois with laser beams out of her nose ... _Please_ can I have that in a later chapter? *big puppy eyes* And finally and answer to the very important question 'what does Severus wear under his robes?' Nice to know he can blush too ;)
| grizziestar chapter 9 . 2/13/2002
ooo I like it, I wonder what will happen in the attic lol naughty me, more more more please (puppyface)
| Akimekura Amura chapter 9 . 2/12/2002
LOL...reminds me of Black Mage from .com "No I wasn't undressing you with the Power of my mind!" heh...I'd prolly picture Snape naked everyday...well...prolly not...But stil...it's not like the thought hasn't crossed my mind
| Troy chapter 9 . 2/12/2002
I love the humor you inject into this story. Lois's comment about Snape being 'au nauturel" under his robes was a hoot. Keep up the great work, the pacing of this story is wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| AniMourner chapter 9 . 2/12/2002
That was great, really funny! Keep writing!