I like both “halves” of the story. I don’t really agree with the 2nd generation potters and friends being shitty either. I didn’t really like how you made Harry kind of a bitch who deals only through mommy bella

I find it absolutely insane that people seem to review this fic even remotely negatively. This is one of the best fics i’ve read in a while, and the best one I read for harry potter.

You’re writing is very good from a story telling perspective. I could not stop reading at any point. I was absolutely enthralled with the plot and how all of the different characters and powers at play interacted and came together. I loved how all of the characters were written, especially Harry and Bella. I personally think you wrote their relationship really well, especially how seamlessly it progressed. Overall wonderful stuff. Thank you for writing

tbh giving harry and bellatrix only daughters is both a cop out and dirty

making leos son the lord black is wrong as well, because technically that kid will only exist because of harry and bellatrix

i really dont understand why harry wants to be around the second generation potters, or why he wants their help, they're a bunch of spoiled, conceited, arrogant brats, tbh

i hate rose, shes a bitch, tbh

i dont really see how cygnus or orion started the war, tbh

The best fic I have read in ages. I honestly cannot put into words how lovely this was, I was entranced by the characters, the wordbuilding and the playout of events. I powered though in 2 days and kind of wish I could forget it all and read it again immeadiatey. I have no idea if the author still reads reviews, but in any case this work has my unending admiration and I'd recommend it to anyone in shouting distance, had I not stayed up to 3am to finish it.

okay i already hate all of the potter children, except for harry

albus is a cunt, seriously what a bitch, using such a dick move

i dont see how harry cant touch the potter money, he is still a potter

how is ten thousand galleons rich? doesnt seem very rich tbh

the dorms are magic, they would make room for a bed

where exactly is andromeda? because if bellatrix is in sixth year, then andromeda should be in fourth, shes younger than bellatrix and older than narcissa.

i think you have the black family tree messed up

orion is the cousin of cygnus

i think orion is younger than you made him

james' father should either be fleamont or charlus

you do know that pomona sprout would be the head of hufflepuff right now, just like horace slughorn is head of slytherin.

now with horace having an accident, i guess they would need a head of house replacement for slytherin

you do know that james has hazel eyes, not blue, right?

the father of lucius malfoy is abraxus

maybe harry dimension travelled instead of time travelled, lol