So awesome! This was a very professional piece of writing, a true alternative/ what if novel. Well done!

And this is where we stop. LITERALLY stupid plot... why can't you think before doing something as stupid as this and deeming it worthy?

Thank you for a good story!

Hope you get a nice inspiration to make a new one

This is good

The more I read of this the more Harry Congress across as an idiot

This fic always fascinated me. Well written. Long. Interesting plot. Crazy pairing. Decent attempts and actual avoidance of the obvious cliches with the pairing and time travel theme.

Only critique would be seeing their relationship develop more. But we did see that (just not as much as I wished) so it was acceptable.

I had red early 13 chapters, then skimmed the rest until I red the last 2 - 45 &46. Why? Because I like a wonder of magic in HP stories, good descriptions, and strong and smart hero - cliché I know. We don't have it in this fiction. We have one magical time-traveling artifact, used twice, which as a plot device irritates me. We have got a strong cadre of characters, I really don't care for, that push plot forward. One stupidly overpowered spell that only HP can cast an astral projection itself, like one trick pony, which I don't like also. We don't have really smart or even overpowered battles, MC just fights and wins or loses, done. Story is good, in the upper 90% of HP fanfics, just not my cup of tea.

I must admit I'm not a fan of big time skips but you managed to write it beautifully!

Love the ending!

Lovely chapter!

This might be one of the saddest things I've ever read.

I haven't the moment to comment on the other chapters but I love the story! It's amazing.

Amazing chapter!

I love the start!

He has no idea what he is doing, not making any progress good novel but hp is so mediocre how will he win against voldi and do what he want to achieve is beyond me