Reviews for Delenda Est
OpenSourceArtist chapter 2 . 3/11
Not only is there an eight year difference in age between Bellatrix and James, but they didn't attend Hogwarts together. As you've already stated that Bellatrix appears no older than eighteen, that means James and company would be nine years old, not even old enough to attend Hogwarts.

Aside from the time-travel you haven't really disclaimed how much of an alternate universe this story will be.
OpenSourceArtist chapter 1 . 3/11
“He didn’t know what she had done, or why Voldemort was torturing her, and honestly, he couldn’t care less…”
“It was disturbing to say the least, and caused him to wonder what she had done to warrant such treatment by her own allies.” -Stating that he doesn’t know why he cares if Bellatrix is alive or not twice in one paragraph is redundant.

“I’d think you of all people knew what the dark lord is like.” - Why are you speaking in past tense?
thepkrmgc chapter 46 . 3/10
the epilogue leaves much to be desired and you missed out on a lot of a lot of drama on the dinner with the potters (though it was amusing) but this fic is the best time travel fic ive read by far and i'll be reading the sequel shortly
thepkrmgc chapter 45 . 3/10
nice job on the posthumous crossroads, and the rallying speech
thepkrmgc chapter 44 . 3/10
how conveinient for barty to get rid of the horcrux in harry's head
thepkrmgc chapter 42 . 3/10
ive got to pity bellatrix at this point, its got to be hard to watch yourself (even if, or perhaphs especially because its an alternate version of yourself) destroy the things you love
thepkrmgc chapter 41 . 3/10
i wondered if/when harry would explain some of his time travel shenanigans, methinks the "i am your son from an alternate future" thing will be disclosed at the private meeting with the potters
thepkrmgc chapter 40 . 3/10
no war is without its casualtys, but its good that bellatrix survived the ambush
HALLIBEL chapter 46 . 3/9
great ;-)
thepkrmgc chapter 37 . 3/9
good plan on amelia's part, it just might be able to cripple the death eaters in one fell swoop if its done well
thepkrmgc chapter 36 . 3/9
it seems like draco has learned the joys of capitalism, im of the opinion that harry should be more proactive about destroying the horcruxes instead of using them though i cant deny their plans effectivness
thepkrmgc chapter 35 . 3/9
dang, i thought this fic only had 39 chapters and was expecting it to be coming to a conclusion
thepkrmgc chapter 34 . 3/9
the battle wasnt as climactic as one could hope but its good to see that the protagonist's relationship isnt without its flaws
thepkrmgc chapter 33 . 3/9
draco's "rehabilitation" is rather amusing, methinks the assault on the burrow will be harry's big reveal
thepkrmgc chapter 32 . 3/9
i wonder why pettigrew's capture is so significant?
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