Reviews for Delenda Est |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is super late a day you're already writing your reboot... but Bella's favourite animal should be a Flemmish Rabbit, 15lbs of pure bunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant find words to properly describe how amazing this Story was. Its too Bad that the epilog was rather short, seeing more family Bonding between the Blacks and Potter would have been nice, the marriage of Rose and Leo, the birth of the triplets who you havnt even named. I cant wait to read the reboot and See how you plan to make this Story even better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first you made harry seem like a killer or war Veteran with ptsd, in his "duel" with bella his switch was flipped and he was like Kill first ask Question after. Now He hesitated to kill rodolphus, one of voldys worst followers? Not likely to Happen in my opinion. As for Rose, typical teenager thinking that she knows better than the rest. Other than that this Story in General is amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco is becoming a businessman. Bella will be pleased. It occurred to me that it might be easy to get around the oaths they swore. They promised to not talk about Harry Ashworth. They promised nothing about Harry Black. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m re-reading this story very excellent story and have come to the conclusion that Harry might be powerful, but Bellatrix is right. He’s a bit dim. Being adversarial with Bellatrix will only clue her in that their future relationship wasn’t the best. He needs to get in touch with his Slytherin side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thepotter" "yes?" "Shut up" reminded me ofmerlin?" "yes?" "shut up" |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's the one thing I hate about HP the most. The magic isn't advancing. It degrades, in fact. So many autors are so sure that tech would best magic, it's just annoying |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evans. Am I the only one who thinks it ridiculously stupid? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arguably my favorite Timetravel fic, though Whispers of a Raven was also fantastic. I’m starting to reread it now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Oh look another supposedly powerful harry potter whose actually isn't and is only a little beta bitch doormat 0/0, going to find a different story now that this one has turned to utter filth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is really good so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbles and friends are so nosy about Harry and Bella's identity, I don't like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is sad that everyone is dying for Harry to live |