Second read and i cant seem to recall how naive this Harry is. I understand his wish to not get his holly wand, but to not make sure he a proper wand is just suicide

I’m actually beyond baffled. You make him get a crap wand with the sole intent of humiliating him later then proceed to have him buy a bunch of easily replaceable wands as a new method. This all makes very little sense seeing how Harry should have learned how to apparate by now and he just needed to leave castle grounds and go to olivanders for a proper wand that he can exert the most power with that wand go to shit super quick. Then there is his lack of tolerance for bellatrix even though by now he would have bonded with her quite a bit and has even acknowledged that she is probably the only person he can call a friend. I’m also pretty sure I’ve read some of this before and got to the point where Orion, Cygnus, and Romulus all die and dropped it soon after because of how ridiculous things kind of got. All I have to say is the extreme caution and fear to cause waves is a problem that plagues time travel fics to the point that it’s boring to read them.

oh god, the master so called manipulator front and center

I’m going to be real here I’m five chaoters in and have seen blatant bullshit. They were prisoners for months and suffered torture throughout the whole experience they would have bonded. Another problem is she knows that he’s from the future so the best approach to bringing her to his side is by being honest cause I don’t see why he’s so adamant about not telling her anything.

My lord is Harry really that much of a stuck up moron that he can not accept that the people he knew in the future are not the people of the present? How utterly idiotic is he that he believes people irrevocably turn out the same no matter what happens. On top of his stuck up arrogance he also seems to have deluded himself into believing Voldemort will be easy to kill ignoring all evidence to the contrary. At this point he deserves to lose. If one can not get over their preconceived and arrogant ways they do not deserve to win.

Great story. I wish the sequel was finished.

Super creative fic! Big fan

I always love this story.

Not sure why Harry isn't killing rodolphus. Also not sure why Harry isn't trusting Bellatrix at this point. Are you kidding me? Harry fought voldemort for 3 or 4 years in a war with Dumbledore and he never found out ab horcruxes? How did the hairpin come undone? How is a hairpin so deadly? And why would voldemort leave without making sure they're both dead?

Pretty sure it's too way too early for any of the Weasleys to be born.

What does Bellatrix mean by precautions Tom mightve taken? That doesn't make any sense to me. Harry didn't even try and talk to the basilisk wtf we know every snake is sentient why wouldnt he be able to talk sense into the basilisk?

There hasn't been mention of them at all

Is Harry going to hunt down the horcruxes?

Well that infiltration lasted less than two chapters... I thought they were going to be in voldemorts inner circle working to bring him down from the inside but ig not. Also you can't negate fiendfyre with a flame freezing spell

The marauders created the map together not just James. The Yew wand should technically already be Tom's