|Reviews for Tropic of Gemini|
| KayRad816 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I'm glad to see these guys back. And I'm definitely digging the Jasper/Alice focus this time around.
Thanks for writing.
P.S. I'm 19 years old and still a virgin.
| delete007 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Your words are magic.
| beegurl13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Oh, I've been waiting... :)
I love it! I'm guessing this is starting before Bella shows? Is that it? I can't wait to get into Alice and Jasper's heads more. I always love them in stories so I can't wait to see what you do to them.
The fight in the drugstore parking lot was great, but I burst out laughing when Edward said he was stuck... The melted candy on the asphalt was genius! :D I love that they both got stuck in it! :D
Poor Alice, what a crappy birthday for the most part. I did love that last little bit with her and Jasper - that was sweet. And I'm glad that she was happy.
The first time...I was nineteen. And to be honest, it sucked. :D I loved him but had no experience, not even anything close to it. But he was patient and 17 years later it's always a lot more fun than it was that first time. And he's the only one, so that's kinda great too.
Well, until Robert Pattinson comes knocking on my door... :)
I love this and I can't wait for more. Oh, I've missed you and your pretty words. I can't wait to drown in them again. 3
| parrotchic chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
i love these crazy kids! :-)
| tolazytologin chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I'm so addicted to your stories. I can't wait for the next chapter!
And I was 19, and it was everything my mother said it wouldn't be, amazing, sweet, and just wow!
| JazzGirl317 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I was so excited to see this come across my inbox that I almost fell off my crutches. But, once again, I couldn't wait for your words. And, once again, I am entranced. Jazz and Alice make me grin. I love hearing their story. Somehow first times never go the way we think. Either we build them up to ridiculous heights and are horribly disappointed or we get everything we never expected. Glad to know I'm not the only one. I'm trying to remember and connect Edward & Bella's dots. I'm already jonesing for more. Thanks for this.
My first time that mattered was at 16. The first time I care about most was at 18.
| deelovely60 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
"in the dumb books the gorgeous soldier/lord/vampire never shouts “Oh, shit, hold still!” upon first entry and promptly unloads more spooge than he’s dumped in the last nine months of resolved foreplay combined." Yeah, pretty close...
So glad you're back.
| I'm.Wishing chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Oh, thank God you and your characters are back! I was just thinking today about how a few of my favorite stories are about to come to an end and how I'd have no good fanfic to read when they did. But now I have Tropic of Gemini to look forward to!
This was a wonderful beginning and I can't wait to see what's going to happen to these crazy kids. I like your take on Alice (I think she's hard to do well) and I love, love, LOVE your Jasper. The ending was realistic and so sweet!
I was 19, it was with the love of my life, we've now been together for ten years, married for six... aw!
| Dawnriki chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I'm so excited for this! This was an awesome start, is it going to intersect with Tropic of Virgo?
I'm surprised that Alice went through with it after the sprained wrist, condom brawl, licorice AND getting stuck in her lingerie...that's dedication!
Oh, and I definitely WASN'T 17, but it was just as awkward.
| Minnakoda chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Thank you for writing a story where the first time wasn't perfect. what is with all these g-damned fic writers and making the girl orgasm the first time (and every time, multiple times) they have sex. Losing my virginity was not sweet and romantic... it was painful and awkward and embarassing and all sorts of bad. GAH and I was 13.
Past that - this looks like a fun fun fun story! I'm excited! And I missed your writing. Hot pants? too funny! and the gumballs? HAHAHAHA.
Now, just to wait oh so patiently for the next chapter... *looks at watch* hmm... *looks at watch again* ... *taps impatiently on the keyboard* hmm... ok not so patiently!
| Minerva.May.I chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
This is such a great surprise!
I love Jasper and Alice from ToV and to have them continue - pure bliss. I loved the entire horrible, wonderful day.
p.s. I was seventeen and it was a Thursday (the fact that I remember the day is more surprising than any part of that turn of events)
| beanothercullen chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Aww I missed these "crazy kids", it's been too long, can't wait to read about more of their new old adventures. Love it that it's Alice and Jasper.
| belli486 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
You are unbelievable, lady! I am so excited that you are back and writing about my favorite characters from another POV.
Love your lyrical and poetic writing style. I shall favorite right away!
Please follow me on twitter, so I can chat with you sometimes!
| SadnessInTheSunrise chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I AM SO HAPPY I HAVE WAITED AN ETERNITY FOR THIS, THANK YOU I LIVE FOR YOUR WORDS
| cabr chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
So funny and sweet! Really lovely and poetic. I was a very good girl (or maybe just idiotic :)), I was 23 and it was on my wedding night :).