Reviews for Hikari: Path of The Avenger |
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Shifuni chapter 15 . 1/15/2011 Sasuke knew probably. Well at least they tried to escape. |
Shifuni chapter 14 . 1/15/2011 I wonder what Sasuke was going to say to her? |
Shifuni chapter 13 . 1/15/2011 i knew it! I knew Hana would have to be Sakura. So finally Sasuke wants Someone... |
crimson candy chapter 34 . 1/15/2011 Oh goodness this story would just be like the perfect ending for the shippuden arc... i cried while reading it. don't worry about the feedback, you did an awesome job, so awesome that no words can describe it. |
crimson candy chapter 30 . 1/15/2011 Yup, i just had to submit another review. That chapter was simply fantastic. All the characters were in character and it was so beautifully structured that i felt like crying in envy of your writing skills. you do have the potential to become a novelist one day and believe me, i've only told that to one other fanfiction writer in the entire . You and your story are both awesome and i really enjoyed reading it, so thank you. |
crimson candy chapter 29 . 1/15/2011 *sigh* seem you always are so concerned about reviews, here is a piece of advice. Write your story not because of the reviews, but because you want to do so. Personally, i'd say your story is one of the best sasukeXOC stories out here in and i find it perfectly credible if someone like Hikari can break past Sasuke's ice cold shield. Your story is the only SasukeXOC story which i really love from the bottom of my heart because your character development is simply marvelous. Sasuke is the perfect balance of his usual emo self and his awkward feelings for Hikari and Hikari is a really realistic character because if i personally came to the Naruto world, i would do the exact same thing as her - stay by sasuke's side and be there for him instead of telling him not to take his revenge. I cannot possibly imagine him giving up his revenge because to simply put it, revenge is what he lives for throughout his entire life so i would have to be by his side to support him instead. Wow haha forgive me for rambling this is one of the longest review i have ever written. Thank you for all the blood and sweat you took to write this awesome story my dear. |
Shifuni chapter 12 . 1/14/2011 Kabuto's little speech to Hikari was actually like an evil speech for once. But it was still creepy! |
Shifuni chapter 11 . 1/14/2011 You know, if someone doesnt answer your question and they ignore it with another question, then they who the person is. |
Shifuni chapter 10 . 1/14/2011 I really didn't expect for this to happen oh well. You know Kabuto is the most creepiest person ever besides Orochimaru. When Kabuto changes to wear if adsorbs Orochimaru, he turns creepier and creepier by the second. |
Shifuni chapter 9 . 1/14/2011 Well at least Sasuke wasn;t a cold hearted bastard and left Hikari there to die. |
Shifuni chapter 8 . 1/14/2011 See, that is what happens when look like someone who you never knew... |
Shifuni chapter 7 . 1/14/2011 Man, that is creepy. Looking like someone who probably died or is dead. |
Shifuni chapter 6 . 1/14/2011 Man, that is just sick. |
Shifuni chapter 5 . 1/14/2011 Sasuke, is so stupid. But apparently he doesnt know it until he kills Itachi and become bi-polar or a hypocrite. |
Shifuni chapter 4 . 1/14/2011 wow. i liked it :D |