I don't get it, why is she so evil? Was there some grand plan I managed to miss? Hikari I'm managing to like you less and less as the story progresses. The only time I did lik you was the small interlude in Konoha. Something drastic better happen soon.

The terror! First her nam was Lily, then Hikari, and now Aiko. I like Lily and Hikari, but what the hell did Madara do to her! That poor little girl. I wanted to skip that part when I read the beggining of that scene. Suigetsu better do something. Poor Sasuke. Where's Jugo? And for Konoha's sake, where's Karin?

Suigetsu is my favorite character out of team taka (hebi). I also like Jugo. Where is Jugo anyway?

Kosuke! Why are you dead! Who killed Kosuke again? Was it Pein? Tobi? Who was it? I really want to know.

Aww! That was so sad! Jiraiya! You're my favorite idiot too! Don't worry Tsundae, you have Naruto!

Finally! It's about time they kissed!

What are you going to do, Hikari? Will it be Kiba or Sasuke?

I'm still in the process of reading this but holy crap this was the best chapter I've read in a very long time. I was literally on the edge of my seat, eyes wide, freaking the hell out. Wicked good job! Can't wait to read the rest!(:

An awesome story it really was one of the best stories I've ever read about Sasuke. I'm reading the sequel right now

Cheers!

LOVED THIS! Onto the sequel :D

OMFG! this is my favorite story out of al your others! Just love the way you made Hikari/Lily! Hikari suits Sasuke like yin and yang! XD

This was an epic story to read :D it was suggested and I was told that it was an amazing, heart-warming story.
I totally agree to that.
I've laughed, cried...laughed some more, and today, experienced a ""WTF" moment.
I'm happy there's already a sequel, I prolly could not have waited :S
Great story. It is now on my favorites list :3

This is amazing! I love how you made up the character! And she's not someone who can suddenly come in from another world and end up stronger than Sasuke. She's a believable character, with different flaws, and she's just a great OC in general.

I liked how you made Hikari still seem mysterious, right when you think that you know her. Somehow, she's connected to the Naruto world. Throughout the whole fanfiction, I was wondering how she was connected to Minato. At first, I thought she may be Naruto's brother...but it doesn't seem right. I can't think of any other possibilities that may lead to me knowing why she resembles Minato perfectly in a female figure. It's fun for me to keep on guessing!

The plot of the story is wonderful too. You're the only writer (that I've read so far—and trust me, I've read enough to be able to tell good from bad) that I have seen actually be able to write a fanfic with an OC that came from our world and not sound totally weird being there.

I also love the the way you had Neji not trust Hikari. I've read a few fanfictions that have the character come back to the Leaf Village after traveling with Sasuke and even though that character has a punishment, everyone still loves her in the end. It's just not how things would really work.

Aright, enough of my rambling. Here's a simple sentence to conclude this review: You're a brilliant author.

:). All done. Just remember, if you need any help, you can talk to me...although I think you're fine.

-FROZEN ICEWOLF

I love this story. It is so much better than some of the crap on this website. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Yes! No romance between Lily/Hikari and Sasuke! This site needs more gen fic. I LOVE IT!