| Reviews for Hikari: Path of The Avenger |
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   Star of Courage chapter 5 . 9/28/2011 Lol, she is like Naruto ne? Wow... |
| Star of Courage chapter 4 . 9/28/2011 Oh no! Hikari! Poor girl! |
| Star of Courage chapter 3 . 9/28/2011 He's so scary. Wow. She's gotta share a room with Sasuke doesn't she? Hah! I knew it. Lol. Yes indeed. There goes THAT plan. |
| Star of Courage chapter 2 . 9/28/2011 Wow. It's so sad how Sasuke changed. Kabuto is a freak and Orochimaru is a (fill in the blank). I feel bad for Li-Hikari. |
| Star of Courage chapter 1 . 9/28/2011 Wow. That's cool. T-T GAARA! T-T I always hated those few episodes. I cried like crazy. This looks really interesting and good. |
| AirishCoffeeHolic chapter 34 . 7/17/2011 Usually... At this point, the OC gets cheesy and stuff but... Really. That was one of the best... Actually is the best fanfic I've read on Naruto on bringing Sasuke Or persuading him to go back. I mean. It was sad and sweet... But thankfully was not cheesy! That was probably my favorite chapters I've read so far... I usually don't review, but this... I just had to say that this chapter was really... truly... amazing. Thank you so much for writing this Fanfic! \_/ |
| queenfirst chapter 47 . 7/15/2011 ARGH! The ending is so disappointing! I would have preferred a happy one... Sigh. |
| queenfirst chapter 31 . 7/15/2011 I was shivering in excitement and anticipation throughout the entire chapter! |
| queenfirst chapter 15 . 7/14/2011 Damn! The end made me tear up! LOLOLOLOL. |
| queenfirst chapter 11 . 7/14/2011 Hana is Sakura, right? Right? :D |
| Somewhere chapter 32 . 6/26/2011 There a fanfic called 'The Honorable Granddaughter Hikari Sarutobi'. You should check it out. Your stories are so similar it's scary. |
| iCooky chapter 43 . 6/23/2011 I love this story its sequel. Hope you update soon! I'm sorry to hear you got discouraging reviews but rest assured, this isn't one of them :) I first came across your stories on TONFA. I'm still checking periodically for updates on the Katsumi fic too! It's interesting how you wrote two stories in very different perspectives - one where the OC knew Sasuke all her life and one who knew nothing about him. I was wondering if you could also post the Katsumi fic on - It would definitely make it easier to access :) Anyways, you're a talented writer; keep up the good work! Best wishes, iCooky |
| Ameletta chapter 46 . 5/2/2011 i just read the whole story and i ... simply don't know what to say! You are AMAZING! the plot, writing style, the emotions... pretty much everything made me sit and read for about ..8 hours. I think you are a very talented writer and im going to read the sequel now hehe. My only little problem is that sometimes Hikari is a bit mary-sues (you know very beautiful, kind, etc) but she appears to have some flaws witch "kinda" balance's it. Well another part of her that i don't understand (but that doesn't mean it's unrealistic) is how she let go her life as Lily in only a year an a half... shouldn't she be more bonded with the woman who raised her? if you exclude these two "problems" the story just rocks ;) And unlike other stories here i CAN see natural character development Overall you are AMAZING and keep getting even better cause i expect more and more fantastic stories from you! :D |
| Lady Audentium chapter 47 . 4/18/2011 Holy shit this was amazing! I absolutely loved it from start to finish and I look forward to reading the sequel! |
| UchihaCrest chapter 2 . 4/14/2011 Not bad... just avoid Mary Sue tendencies. |