God, I cried so hard. Imagine, what would it feel like to lose everything/everyone you loved. It makes my heart ache everytime I think about it, and I'm so glad that I don't have to live through it.

Oh, wow. Hikari is a really deep character. I can never get that much depth into mine, and no I'm not being sarcastic.

This story is very VERY amazing! I really enjoyed the organization and structure of the chapters...at first, I started reading it yesterday and thought, 'wow this is different :), but kinda slow'...Now my opinion's changed so, I'm really having a fun spring break just reading this in the car..for like 8 hours... :p

-but now im on a laptop, and enjoying this story and more chapters to come :)

Wonderful work!

Yay for sequels! YAY!

I like how you made Lily so, so, um, human. Like how she has faults and weaknesses. Good main character material.

Oh

my

god!

I LOVED THIS STORY! :D haha I know I've reviewed like a bazillion times, but I just can't help it! You write perfectly! And the characters personalities and the plotline were perfect! Haha so you don't need to ask for reassurance :p you're amazing!

And now I'm excited to read the sequel! (goodbye, year 12) hahahaha :p

keep up the brilliant work! :) xx

Haven't finished this chapter yet, bit it is simply amazing!

My favourite quote so far:

"I don't know! What, did you expect some heart-felt monologue about you and your relentless path towards revenge and evil? A path that is a complete dead end, in case you haven't figured it out! Did you expect me to fall, helpless into your arms like some pathetic idiot? Did you expect me to tell you how much I love y–"

It was then that I realized it.

I was in love with Sasuke Uchiha.

Haha I cannot help myself; I am a mega Sasuke lover!

Keep up the good work!

Okay, first I want to thank you for writing this fic...I have been dying to read a new, good multi-chapter fanfic. I have some really amazing ones on my fav list, but I get bored when I dont find a new update (Kinda makes me feel bad about those who hav me on my fav list, evn if the number is very small XD)

Hats off to u, really. And thank you. I will tell you something, your OC is so much like me, that I was like 'WOOT!' during the whole time I read, her reactions at most places were almost predictable for me. Maybe thats why I loved this story so much that I secretly read it on my blackberry, despite the restriction placed on me due to exams nearby (thanks mom! i mean jeez, I am good at studies), and came over to review this on my pc, since I wasnt able to sign in my phone, despite the restrictions. It might sound idiotic, but I do know about leaving yourself behind, like a forgotten dream, innocent. Of course not as drastic as lily here, but I have seen that phase. Like blending two people, moulding them to be one...its terribly conflicting, but still, you find peace in that conflict. You couldn't have described it any better.

Hats off to you. I think you might add another person to the list of people who are completely smitten with your story :P

P.S. I might have gotten a little personal here... but i think that the only way to show your sincerety is by being forward about it. Aaaah and before I forget, I cried in this fic, just a little...I don't usualy cry easily, but this time I did, and for SASUKE! OMG! I sincerely dislike sasuke...I was sympathetic earlier, but now that his brain has been messed by the Madara bastard, I have nearly stopped believing there is any hope for him. But your Hikari is like what I imagine myself to be when I dream about you know, transporting to Naruto world. I want to save Sasuke, but without falling~in~love~with~this~dark~and~quiet~but~hot~dude part. Its more of a sisterly affection which I share with all of the Naruto characters, even the older ones.

Wow thats a huge review I have written...I hope I didn't make you sleep with everything I wrote...

Aah before going, your characters are completely OOC...NOT! XD they are very nicely potrayed, not a hair out...figuratively.

Ja ne!

-sanmitamaya

By the way; you're 15 and can write this well?

I take my hat off to you!

This story is simply amazing! You are one of the very few people who should be writing a novel and publishing it!

I totally envy your writing style! Haha it's weird; I have a story like this in the making! Meaning it's still in the early stages :p

Anyways, I LOVE IT!

All i can say is Holy Shit. THis story is just amazing! The detail and emotions are incredible! Your writing style and your OC puts my poor little one to shame!

As a writer i know those words are amazing but, heres something better. I hope someday (hope its soon) that i can right as well as you. It reaally is just incredible. Now. on to the sequel! XD

...why couldn't you just let Sasuke be happy..?

-sigh-

amazing writing..

I am so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long I went to another country and geuss what there's no internet there. So I hope you good luck on your next chapter. And don't make me die of boredom.

Loved this story :)

damn! I didnt want Hikari to disappear! After Sasuke had fallen in love with her.