Reviews for fading away
ChocolateKisses chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
Oh my gosh...

This has got to be... the most... unique, wonderful, terrible, saddening, bittersweet thing I have ever read...

And you made me cry so badly...

Wonderful writing, you truly have a talent... I may get an account purely to favorite and watch your stories...

but...just wow...

Best fanfiction I have ever read. In multiple ways...
ChocolateKisses chapter 7 . 1/1/2011
Don't really know how to explain it... but... i really love this chapter for so many reasons I can't even explain.
ChocolateKisses chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
This is turning out to be a very interesting fanfiction... When it began it was so different that it actually compelled me to continue reading past the first chapter. It took me a while to understand what the scenes in bold/italics were but I finally figured it out and your comment at the end confirmed it {though sometimes I get confused on who's doing the bold thinking}

I guess I'll read it all the way through to figure it out. lol

Very intriguing to say in the least. Very.. unique.

This part alone makes me want to continue:

"Dreams are foggy, right?"


"But even though I never remember mine, I know they're always…clear. Things are foggy when I'm awake."

"Maybe we're wrong."

"What do you mean?"

"Maybe this life is our dream."


"…And the dream is our life."
Perfect love kills all fear chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
do you write the bolded text or is it a song. I tried looking it up and i'm finding nothing. So if you did write the bolded text then you're really good at writing songs or whatever it's supposed to be.

I love your story.

It's unique.

I love your writing style

I love the part where he said she was a defect, but she was human

Sorry for not leaving longer review but I want to read more.

A.Rose.Love chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
i agree with the fact that i have just been mindfucked, lol, it was really good, i liked how you wrote it, with the 3 different time periods (sorta) like the italicized as her dreams, the one with sakura's thinking in bold (i sorta took that as sasuke's dreams, even though i dont think they were) and then the actual story, im glad they didn't really actually die, and that it was just her dreaming, though it was really sad; i liked the entire idea of it though, like her not having a memory and sasuke being very good to her; i saw the itatchi touching her thing coming though, and it was sad, and naruto dying made me sad too, but you conveyed their feelings very well, and sakura discovered/rediscovered her feelings fantastically, it wasn't like 'BAM! i know what im feeling' it was more subtle and what i would imagine realistic. since it was all just a dream, i guess it sorta just showed sasuke's good side in it, how he's normally gentle with her and cares alot more, but it showed his small bursts too; it was sad that they couldn't have children together, and that sasuke thought something was wrong with him at first before she told him, i like anthony reflecting naruto and ino being at the hospital; it was all very well done, and i hope you dont give up on naruto as a fandom, (i guess thats what you call it?) i think you still do very very well, your story was a fantastic read, and i liked it alot, it made me think, i personally dont think it matters if it takes a month to update, sometimes it just takes that long, though hopefully after a while the feeling of being in love with the characters and the story will come back, you know? though i hope you dont ive up, you write far too well to drop it with this, you keep them in character and make realistic progress through the story, i loved it


sorry that was so long
Poprika chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
Loved it. It was an amazingly, heartwrenching and beautiful ending to a great story. The line, "Sasuke broke incredibly easily, she had noticed—one touch and he'd fall apart." just rang so, so true, both in the story and canon. Id never thought about Sasuke like that before, but when I read that line I realized how right you were!

Awesome job.
withloveagain chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
I thinkkk i understood lol, i was kind of confused at first but after re-reaading it i'm pretty sure I get it lol. Anyway I'm sad to think that the story is over but man oh man you are one fabulousss author I really enjoy reading your writings maybe one day you can think about making an Itachi and Sakura fic yes (:
chronophobia chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
what was it that you said along the way?

The dream was their- something. yeah. cool. really cool. you're good. :)
theAlphabet chapter 12 . 12/30/2010
Oh wow, I really looked forward to all these chapter updates and was never once bored with the story :)

haha.. imagine if Sasuke and Sakura adopted a kid who turned out to have a personality like Naruto... That would really test Sasuke's patience, especially when Naruto and Uchiha jr got together for mischief...

But Really, great story. I loved it :D
Always from Afar chapter 12 . 12/30/2010
Oh, wow. Didn't see that coming.

Anyway, that was amazingly written. With the snippets and all. 3
The Blood Thirsty Sliver Wolf chapter 12 . 12/30/2010
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Okay, I ADORED this story, but is it considered a sh!tfic? I just read your tips on , and it said if the author doesn't use proper capitalization, et cetera, it's bad...

I see you are also a bit of a hypocrite. It's good to know that amazing authors like you are ... normalish. It gives me hope. Although I'm still deleting all my stories.

Love, Pein

SoMe.CrAzY.rAnDoM.cHicK chapter 8 . 12/29/2010
you killed Naruto... well I guess it suits the story...

However I must say you are a very talented writer, I was able to feel their pain, their emotions... Keep going. :]- sig smile
kerapal bubbles chapter 12 . 12/29/2010
so...lemme get this straight...the whole thing was a dream...and the little blurbs in the middle were real life...right?


but it was a great story. you had me crying at the end, btw, but it was great. truly fantastic. :) thank you for a great story and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
delicate.desires chapter 12 . 12/28/2010
I'm actually really confused. D: So... It was all a dream! o: But yeah, this story was amazing! o: I'm sad to see that it's over. Great job, though!
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