Reviews for Time
NeverFree chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
It's lovely! You sum it up in the first sentence, and expand on it, and then throw in the last line to sew it all up. You've got this down to a science, huh? :) The one thing that bugs me, darling, is that the very last sentence uses present tense, and everything else is past tense. Still, it's a minor hiccup, and the story overall is sweet.

Thank you, as always, for sharing with us.
RandomPerson535 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
AW! CUTE!
Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
That was really cute! I think it's really sweet picturing them on a couch, cuddling while watching movies. I like Zack's type of movies, hehe. Anyway, good job! Loved it! :D