Reviews for Graduation Party
dee87 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
great story!

:Dee
Clever xXx Pseudonym chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
cute and sorta funny but you should continue and tell about what happens inside! please continue, alot of you other readers feel the same way!
leaky.oven chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
You know... reading this kinda made Mike my favorite human as well. XD

This is awesome. I can't think of anything more in-depth to say beyond the wall of giggling and "g'aw"-ing. The last paragraph was especially adorable.
french anonyme chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
it's to bad that there are not another chapter. It was funny...

(Sorry if what i said it's not good but i'm french and if i'm read english i spoke/write very bad)

So... good story even if there are one chapter
FelicityT chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Felicity
GlamorousIndieRockAndRoll chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
lol this sounds really good u have gotta update soon! x
becca chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
was that it? just one chapter? noooooooooo there has to be more! its to good to not continue...
Corinne Tate chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Found this in the humor community and the summary sounded like fun. It's been a while since chapter one was posted and I guess I was expecting a little bit more. Glad you used mikes POV and I like the sparkle comments.
neopets39 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Good story so far! the time jump was a little confusing at first, maybe if there was a line of '****' or something.

i like what DARE stood for! hopefuly you havnt abandonded this story, im looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
SneakyLi chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Cool and funny! Can't wait till you update )
krystalmethx chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Lol. I just hope this is gonna be a comedy with the cullens and the others getting back a eachother with pranks but cullens would always win of course :P anyways i hope alice/edward catches stupid mike at the punchbowl:)
ebhg chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This was a lot of fun! I can't wait to see the rest of the party- you've done a great job with Mike's pov without making him creepy or just plain stupid.

The Burbs was a favorite of mine growing up; I loved that you referenced it! I can imagine Mike going home after the party and having dreams of large barbecues;)

Great job!

ebhg:)
Justine Lark chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Very cute and entertaining! There were a lot of lines in this story that really made me giggle:

"like a kid caught stealing his father’s Playboy …not that I knew what that’s like."

"the very ‘not-gay’ right shoulder bump. That step was my idea."

"our enemy was not the English …Well, maybe English class."

"If scary movies taught us anything, if the Cullens do turn out to be psychos, the sluttiest girl is always the first to go."- I can totally see Mike thinking that!
twilightluver chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
luv it.. u should countinue!
katmom chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Cute start!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie