|Reviews for Playtime's Over|
| bhoney chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Yikes! You're not just going to leave it there, are you? Where's Sam? He must rescue his big brother!
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
This was terrific. I particularly loved "Scarlet flashed, crimson blossomed." Very poetic.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Gorgeous! How about extending this little appetizer a bit into a full-length story? *pokes*
I for one, would love to read it. :-D
| masondixon chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Very good but it would be even better if it were 200 words..or 300...or 10 even ! Just a thought. Thank You.
| LivingForTv chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
What a witch! (Not the word I wanted to use but you know) Toying with our Dean like that. Please get her off him!
| KatyMM chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Oh yes, nice bit of manacled!Dean, hurt!Dean and snarky!Dean! Very nice indeed!
| Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
ooh Jane - are you seriously gonna leave it there! we want more playtime! great job
| dreamlitnight chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Will Dean ever learn to keep some of his thoughts to himself? His mouth always gets him in trouble. hehe. Great drabble. ;0)
| Amberdreams chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
M could definitely see this expanded into something longer - tantalising...
| CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
This is very alluring indeed, but very dark. I like the way the gray eyes swirled into ebony. The expression was awesome! The whole drabble is awesome! Good job in picturing the darkness of the situation.
| Tribble Master chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
well, my curiosity is peaked. you should certianly turn this into a one shot. it's a beautiful start. _ Write on!
| Noninone chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
oh God! you people are torturing Dean a lot! LOL
| Swellison chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Nicely written bit of really hurting Dean, trussed up and at the mercy of a demon. Love the 'grey eyes swirled ebony' hint you dropped there. Is this going to be continued, with Sam to the rescue? Or are you leaving us dangling?
| Micaiah chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Shackled hurt!Dean is even better than just hurt!Dean. :)
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Hey Cap'n...ahoy me hearty!
"Grey eyes swirled ebony" Um, lovely image. Heehee, so sweet if a little forceful in her 'seduction'!