Reviews for Say When
JoyBean chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Oh, what a beautiful followup to your other story. I felt the character's pain, which is always a sign of great writing. It was all so very moving.
Chocolatery chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
interesting story. I wonder how their story will continue.
DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
great story! please continue!
christiangirliemiranda chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
So sad! I like that Tony is always there for Ziva!
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Oh so poignant, my heart aches for both of them. I really hate that the show has steered away from the horrors she suffered... there needs to be fallout.
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
that was really well written. all the hurt..
Nemisses chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Very well written. I bet she can never hear Gibbs' ever again after what Saleem told her about rule one.
KindleLyn chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Powerful stuff you've got here...and its handled very well. Thanks for sharing!
Lune-Solei chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
What? How could you leave it there? Who did this to her? I hope you do continue this because I love the way you wrote this. It's really heartbreaking yet not at the same time which is an odd combination given the subject matter. Good job!