|Reviews for Coming into Being|
| Lee723 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
That was really sweet, bb.
Sigh. I loved how bummed out he was because he didn't get
Then he gave his BFF her first kiss. Squee. haha.
That was adorable. :D
| theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
This was unbelievably adorable. It tugged at my heart and made me smile. Thank you.
| whohellanoes chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
such a cute little story. thank you
| itaipu chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
| Blahblahblahblahb chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
i loved this story! the innocence in it makes everything just that much sweeter! It really is the best one-shot i've read in a lonnng time. There weren't a lot of breathtakingly exciting twists in the plot...but you managed to weave normal daily life incidences into perfection.
loved it! you're a natural at writing fan fictions!
| Jenox chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Cute! :D i was thinking that since this is mostly Bella POV, that maybe you could make a Edward POV? just a suggestion though...
| Cheaward chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
| BrownHairedMage chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This is really sweet. I think I've read it before because it seems familiar. Maybe it's my second time reading it. It's so cute, and I love it! :D
| xXxMaisy chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Ah.. So sweet. I loved it!
| The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
that was lovely!
| DelicieuxGateau chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Best thing to read before bed! :) So sweet.
| outtayourface chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
This was absolutely beautiful :)
| Gotta luv the Vamps chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I can not think of any words to describe how amazingly awesome this story was...just wow Great Job :D soooo...refreshing and just wow
| stories1 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Gosh I do love all your stories :) They're all so sweet and bring a goofy grin to my face! Thanks for sharing :)
| mysinger chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I really enjoyed this story. The way Bella and Edward's friendship grew and blossomed into love was sweet. Well done!