|Reviews for Coming into Being|
| Blahblahblahblahb chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
i loved this story! the innocence in it makes everything just that much sweeter! It really is the best one-shot i've read in a lonnng time. There weren't a lot of breathtakingly exciting twists in the plot...but you managed to weave normal daily life incidences into perfection.
loved it! you're a natural at writing fan fictions!
| Jenox chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Cute! :D i was thinking that since this is mostly Bella POV, that maybe you could make a Edward POV? just a suggestion though...
| Cheaward chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
| BrownHairedMage chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This is really sweet. I think I've read it before because it seems familiar. Maybe it's my second time reading it. It's so cute, and I love it! :D
| xXxMaisy chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Ah.. So sweet. I loved it!
| The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
that was lovely!
| DelicieuxGateau chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Best thing to read before bed! :) So sweet.
| outtayourface chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
This was absolutely beautiful :)
| Gotta luv the Vamps chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I can not think of any words to describe how amazingly awesome this story was...just wow Great Job :D soooo...refreshing and just wow
| stories1 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Gosh I do love all your stories :) They're all so sweet and bring a goofy grin to my face! Thanks for sharing :)
| mysinger chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I really enjoyed this story. The way Bella and Edward's friendship grew and blossomed into love was sweet. Well done!
| belleanne chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Loved it! :)
| Lilttleturtle chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
very sweet story :) loved it! thanks for sharing
| folm chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
What a sweet story! I am impressed how you conveyed so much humor and love into a such a short story. It was a lovely little pick-me-up to read before I dive back into tedious work, so THANKS!
| onlybelieved chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
loved it 3
It was very sweet and I can't believe I haven't read this earlier, it was on my list for ages oO.