|Reviews for Protecting the Angel|
| soraskybeauty chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
wow i never knew anyone that could turn words into emotinal feelings this well it's amazing i hope im making sense anyway truly a brillant and perfect story of abby ) and hoagie and cree.
| DarkMike 15 chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
OOC; yes, a fail; no. Don't beat your self up Jess. I'm assuming this takes place during thier teen years? Did you act the same as when you were a kid as you do now? People change as they grow up, no matter how hard we try to stop it. The fun of writing the KND characters into thier older years is taking a crack at how they would behave with some maturity added, something you did rather well. I enjoyed the fic, glad to see something else on a slightly darker note. Keep it up.
| TheNocturne chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Yeah, it feels much better to me now!
It's more melancholy, but I like that, for some reason.
If you want to, you could think about writing a companion piece to this, too. I think it could be continued and still be a good fic. But it's up to you, of course!
Question for you, too!
If I held a contest like you are (I know, I'm shameless, but it just seems so fun), and it was for Kuki/Wally, would you enter? X3
| Laurie43 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
the ending is so sad compared to the last one
but it is still good trust me on that!