|Reviews for Centurion Trouble|
| yaoiprincess101 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Haha! Hilarious! XD
| D-Drive chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Your grammar needs a little work. The phrasing was a bit odd in places and you changed tenses when you shouldn't have.
On the plus side, this was a very funny story.
| Perentie Fan chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Well this was written well enough I think, and I giggled at the part where Emil tells who he thinks is Marta to get out of his bed as if it's something he's used to saying. _ Marta is such a great flirt and so forward I wouldn't put it past her, not after the way she tried seducing Emil in the hot springs.
Still, the whole placing of events sort of makes light of the revelations about Emil being Ratatosk and everyone dealing with it andthat seems off to me. Further the suspicion toward lloyd doesn't make much sense after the way he saved everyone and swore to protect Emil from Richter as a friend. And while Solum has a great personality, his description of only eating and sleeping doesn't make much sense when you consider that the centurions are supposed to help maintain mana balance with the help of their respective monster elements and that only Aqua is known to neglect those duties.
Still it was a fun read, don't take my critique too seriously. I tend to overanalyze things. _
| IdioticArtist chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
That was hilarious! Especially the last part where Ratatosk said, "I'm not gay, for your information." It literally had me rolling on the floor! Sorry, my obsession over Ratatosk is too huge for me to bear O-o
Anyways, keep up the good work~!
| AntiSora chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
...That... That really made my day. That was so funny. XD
((of course, we all know Emil is gay for Master Richter. and that Ratatosk is gay for Emil. ))
Ah, but seriously, this was very amusing. XD I especially loved the part where Ratatosk is informing Emil he isn't gay, and Emil just figures that he's hearing things. XD
You should totally write more like this, it was funny. Very funny. AND AWKWARD! XD Which makes it more funny.
| Shadedumbreontolazytologin chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Oh dear god...