Reviews for Control
Tetra Terra chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Can I just say that I love, love, love this? It's nice to see inexperienced Spock for a change. Nicely done!
valyria chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
That was both incredibly sweet and incredibly hot. bravo!
Opalsmith chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Beautifully written - I loved the intensity of emotion and that it was Spock's first time.
XMarisolX chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
THIS LINE IS PERFECTION: "One eyebrow lifted, but his eyes did not open. Otherwise his expression did not change. "You have a gift for understatement," he replied, his voice pitched slightly lower than normal.

ALSO THIS ONE: After a time, he said, "I am sorry that I was not able to please you, Nyota."

AND FINALLY THIS: Never before had a lover gazed at her with such longing. No one else had ever made her feel so desired or wanted.

Those lines turn this from just porn into an intimate story about two people in love. Bravo.
Zhian'tara chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
I would also get behind the idea of an L rating. This is the definition of love making - and Nyota's wise enough to realize and express that. The details can be perfected with practice - the love behind it is already perfect.

Layla chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
librawriter chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Wow. Um, wow. That was hot. Let me go find my husband...
FanFictionWriter4077 chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Nanyin chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
this was really good. so don't be a shamed of this tid bit..quite good really
Wander52 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Love the intensity of this did great.
lupinskitten chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
That was fantastically written and very tasteful. I LOVED it!
Linstock chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Wow. *fans self vigorously to cool down*. This is beautifully written. Erotic and powerful. I see you say you do not write much of the “M”..what a shame, you do it well and not many do.
SillyJo chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
This story is INCREDIBLE! My goodness. My friend had told me about it, and I was afraid it would be a sort of porn. Even if it was a soft porn, I've just never really been comfortable with it. But this is so different! It's incredible. It's so easy to completely understand the emotion from both of them. This is written very, very well.
Nyotarules chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Enjoying your oneshots looking forward to a multichapter - this is sweet and romantic not quite a M but still erotic.
Operamuse chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Wow, did you say this is your first smut piece? This was amazing to read, you added so much detail that I got completely caught up in the story and got quite hot. You did a fantastic job, and you made it touching, arousing, and realistic for a first time between these two. Loved it!
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