|Reviews for Empty|
| X.summergrey.X chapter 16 . 1/18
I feel like this story is getting to much for me. you should put something about angst up top. maybe some warning about self harm because I was not thinking it would be in here this much and this deep.
| X.summergrey.X chapter 5 . 1/18
well at least she yelled at him before taking him back.
| babesbraves chapter 42 . 8/26/2013
What an epic book! You had everything in it from horror, pain and desolation to love, understanding and in the end happiness! Your story showed that even the best plans and intentions can cause the worst possible results. I am so glad they had their new beggining to a blissful future. Thank you for sharing your story and please write more Twilight vamp fiction as you are fantastic at it!
| LADARTHA chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Great start. Glad I stumbled across your story.
| Feminine Archetype chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
#1) I am enjoying your story. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. #2) i really hope you ean Coca-Cola as in the soft drink and not cocain...
| CassandraLowery chapter 40 . 5/25/2013
I've been reading your story avidly after downloading it to my Kindle, and it's one of my favorite stories EVER (and I've read nearly 400 so far). I've also been jotting down all of your lovely recs, and this is the first one I've read myself. I LOVED Wrenfield Hall; I've read it more than once, even! Great rec!
I can't express how much I've enjoyed "Empty"-you are an incredible writer, and I have absolutely fallen in love with your fragile-yet-strong Bella and your angsty, apologetic Edward. And Alfie is one of my favorite original characters ever!
Stellar writing, plotting, character development, and style-just an all-around exceptional read! (Forgive my technical review-I'm a former literature/writing professor at a small liberal arts university, so I get a bit academic around the edges...) ;)
Lovely job, my dear!
Cassandra (who's going to put the finishing touches on her own chapter and post today...)
| StupidLambTanya chapter 42 . 5/23/2013
I really enjoyed reading your story :)
| BridieM chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Just re-reading this story. Sometimes nothing but angst (and romance) can scratch that itch. Fallen in love with this story all over again. Thank you. :)
| animelover777 chapter 25 . 4/8/2013
I'm so addicted to your story. I like readin stories about eating dosorders an I was trying to find the story my mia but I can't find it anywhere.
| obsessedwithedwardandbella chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
ohh poor bella
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
I'm really loving this! I can't wait to read the next chapter so I'll stop typing and go do that now!
| Scarlet3086 chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
So sweet. I love Emmett!
| Guest chapter 42 . 3/5/2013
This is a wonderful story, , only the rape stuff, was very hard for me, thank god, you wrote about it, with class...i love it, is my first rape...i never read abou it, i think i'm getting stronger heheheheh
thank you very much i really enjoy it 3
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 27 . 2/12/2013
Because of the nature of vampires common sense already forbids to change Bella at this moment. During the change Bella will freeze in her current physical and mentaly state. With this it will be nearly impossible to overcome her trauma. Bella has already a very poor ability to move on, with the change into a vampire it will be non-existent
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 22 . 2/12/2013
"Bella had always been the one who took care of everybody else,..."
Because of the statement I want to punch Charlie. His lazy butt and his flighty ex pushed her in this direction. And Bella didn't say anything because of her doormat tendencies.