Reviews for Naruto: Unyielding
mene77 chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Who is the cloaked man? Naruto from the future?
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
"All of that made sense, and he did have to admit that he defiantly was behind all of his classmates at the academy."

Definitely, not defiantly.

Teme is an insulting way of saying "you" so it really shouldn't be used in the way you are using it, which is as a suffix.
Greysh chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Nice start! I wonder who it is... I hope that you will tell us :) mabye a couple of hints -
Lady Dragon chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I like this story so far, it has potential and a great deal of mystery. Hopefully there is another chapter in the works?
Arkeus chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
ahah :3

Sounds ok, though it doss have a quite a feeling of 'intro'.
Sanz0girl chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
It's very interesting. loved it. wonder who the cloak guy is?
buzzbumble chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
There are some small spelling mistakes but nothing major ie

:forth should be fourth etc , well you get the point... Who is the masked dude? Your 2 stories are really good mate! I have some good stories for you to read if you are looking for them , they are in my c2 stories collection(IT's in my profile, incase you were wondering).