|Reviews for Unsung Story of the Inconspicuous|
| Kitty Smith chapter 13 . 10/16
Not logged in right now but I just... I almost cried laughing at this chapter. Yamada's wife is sheer beauty
| SM3LLY chapter 50 . 10/11
I have read this story like five times and I only just now realized that raiku did the equivalent of "have u tried turning it off and on again" smh
| FreelanceBum chapter 62 . 9/27
Its been almost a year, I hope you haven't abandoned this.
| Shebali chapter 62 . 9/27
One of the weirdest stories I've read, but lots of fun. Hope you come back to it someday. Raiku is a darling, and I kinda hope Ryuu can be rescued from the terrible fate of becoming a Character?
| FreelanceBum chapter 57 . 9/27
Haiku must happen, she can't resist for much longer.
| FreelanceBum chapter 54 . 9/26
I really wish I could have seen how smoothly her father flowed from one scene to the next in comparison to her.
| FreelanceBum chapter 52 . 9/26
To the shock of noone, yet simutaneously to the extreme pleasure of everyone.
| FreelanceBum chapter 49 . 9/26
Oh no, 13 more chapters and the protagonist is dead forever.
| FreelanceBum chapter 48 . 9/26
Pretty sure they have to do the opposite of this procedure.
| FreelanceBum chapter 47 . 9/26
I'm going to be sad if the Plot takes her lightning.
| FreelanceBum chapter 46 . 9/26
Like the world's most evil beanstalk.
There. Nailed it.
Daisukenojo's moment of smug and silent triumph at his perfect metaphor
It was a simile, you silly ninja.
| FreelanceBum chapter 39 . 9/25
If she is the only one left from the team, she can take Sasuke's spot on Naruto's team...wouldn't that be...dramatic?
| FreelanceBum chapter 34 . 9/25
Hinata is always better for Raiku, cuz HinataXRaiku aka Haiku forever.
| FreelanceBum chapter 24 . 9/25
A/N: Ah, Raiku. You can't have any children, much less eight
Thats...kinda sad actually. Well, provided she wanted any I suppose.
| FreelanceBum chapter 20 . 9/25
I am still shipping Raiku/Hinata, the OTP, and have dubbed the pairing name of "Haiku". Cuz it is pure poetry for them to be together.