Reviews for Rusty Blood
ForTheFandom chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
THE PATIENCE
Odette16Ilh chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
This is brilliant! It's like watching an episode! especially Mike - the way you made him speak was amazing! I could hear him say it!
Jay Punker chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Brilliant. Reminds me of bloody years ago when I wrote my own little young ones short, me an the girl I was seeing agreed to write one each and see whose was best, only she never bloody wrote one. Lol. Mine was nowhere near as good as yours, and the best parts of it were entirely lifted from a young ones book I had (Not a story book, just one with all kinds o wierd shit in it. Lol) I can't remember much of it, but recall that at the end, for some reason or other, the fascists made them work in a factory producing Thatcher masks *Shudder* You have them all perfectly in character, although Vyv seemed a lot less bloodthirsty than usual, I can't picture him ever helping Rick, or indeed apologising. And Rick wouldn't have gone to the shops, he'd have sent Niel. They're minor faults thoughj, I loved it, It was never really mentioned in the series that Vyv was a medical student, so kudos for remembering that :D Another note, the gobbledygook that Mike came out with was sooooo like him, I could picture him saying it as I read it, he always comes out with that crap, just to confuse everyone. Lol
sudowoodo chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I was there thinking for half the goddamn thing that it wasn't going to mention how Rick got the rusty knife in his stomach! But then it did. Lol.

I loved it.

Mike's personality was so perfect.

And Rick and Vyv were just adorable.

Really great, well done!
kauri-blume chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
:) and then vyvyan and neil went upstairs to have passionate sex!

yay for you
this story is really good, and its really in character too
lege et lacrima chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING AND YOU ARE AMAZING. Your characterisation of Mike, especially... spot on! Just... wow.

"Rick, as the Retired Doctor said as he walked out the door, 'I simply don't have the patience,'" was the BEST line. Dude. Epic.

Thank you so much for writing this. :)

- Legs
The.Dust.Of.Jack chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Lol, i think ythat was really god, you did that realy great and all the characters sounded really in character. Well done X]
Blood-Sucker-1428 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Wow, I really liked that. It was writting really nicely and I enjoyed the interaction very much.
Anaya Doitici Orewid chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Quite liked this actually! I'd certainly love to read more Young Ones fics from you. Any chance of that~ :)?
tea-cake-biscuits chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I actually really like this!

It is meant to imply slash... right?

Hope so. I LOVE the interaction between Rick and Vyv, SO CUTE. And the whole thing was just lovely. Hope you'll write some more Young Ones fic!