Reviews for Barely Breathing
fcat5761 chapter 5 . 12/18/2011
They really took the long way to find each other. So happy they got their chance to do what they were meant to do, love each other! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
ilovealion chapter 5 . 9/21/2010
That was a good story. Thanks for writing.
ilovealion chapter 4 . 9/21/2010
That was a fast transition. I'm glad the kids didn't come back to a show on the couch! Hehehe
ilovealion chapter 3 . 9/21/2010
These 2 guys are really messed up! I hope they can work it out.
ilovealion chapter 2 . 9/21/2010
I am enjoying your story! Bella holds a grudge! Edward has grown up and matured. Moving on to 3 :)
ilovealion chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I found your story when I was reviewing a cherryblossom one shot. (Just fyi) I am always drawn to highschool asswards... I can't wait to move on to the next chapter. Oh, and by the way, I am too old to lust for RPattz too. But he is just too adorable! Thanks for writing.
twilightmom1 chapter 5 . 8/7/2010
Loved it! I always love daddyward...
twilightmom1 chapter 4 . 8/7/2010
WOW! That was unexpected. I'm glad he got help for his issues and I am really glad she ran into Alice and went to see Edward.
twilightmom1 chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
Good Lord these 2 have some issues they need to work through.
twilightmom1 chapter 2 . 8/7/2010
These poor guys. Yes, it was all Edward's fault that Bella is the way she is. She is gonna have a hard time forgiving him for what he did to her.
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
WOW! Edward in an ass. Poor Bella, I am glad she has Jacob though.
jpfree chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
A wonderful short story, can't wait to read the next one.
jpfree chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Hey Sue, well the verdict...it's great and I truly mean that, no smoke blowing I promise. You have a really engaging writing style, not over wordy on the descriptors but enough to get a feel for the context and the characters. I love that they are both hiding, from each other and probably themselves too. I also love that it's based in England. Ok, that's enough cos I want to read on. jp xxx
rubell chapter 5 . 4/18/2010
again, wow...not even sure whirlwind is the correct term here
rubell chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
wow, this has jumped all over the place
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