|Reviews for Anything Is Everything|
| seibelle chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
The plot was very entertaining except for a few grammatical errors.
'shoe' shoule be 'show'
'hoe' should be 'how'
Is English not your primary language? :-)
It's also not mine so I am lenient in errors.
However, the flow of your story is remarkably not boring and you used just enough words. Just work on proper word usage and you'll be awesome.
Maybe it was also a bit fast-paced on some parts but it was a wonderful one-shot nonetheless.
Thank you for sharing... :-)
| satomika chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
it kind of feels rushed...
but good job...
| bluewitch143 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
well done.. keep up the good work!
| orchit crest chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
nice story. can't wait for the sequel.
| crimson cocoa chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
sweet. although i think its er... crazy as well about the whole baby thing but i understand you have your own reason. i'm looking forward to the sequel as well.
| chronosthirteen chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Well, i have absolutely no idea what that was about, having never read/watched the manga/anime/drama.
But from what i can tell, its really good. A few typos, but good.
And...shouldn't they, you know, get married first? Before they try making babies? Just wondering...
| mysterymy chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I like it!
Let's have more,ne!
| miniwoo chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I say go with what you planned. M-rating, after all I think most of us can behave like mature (snicker) adults (hehe).
Yeah, the baby thing threw me off like you said but hey, it was a good fic and if you wanted it in there then whatever. It does fit, it's just weird.
| cubangirl chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
good job! sequel please!
| ponyo chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
i voting for the sequel... i'm okay with both rating. Is it going to be different if the rating is different?
okay, hope to read the sequel soon.