Reviews for But sometimes it's a good hurt
iloveashandquinn chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Omg artemis is evil! Really dark but very good:)
ILiveInOwlCity chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Gosh, this is really good.

Yes, it was pretty dark, but still... a good kind of dark. :D

Hmmmm... I've never seen this side of Artemis before. Kinda vampire-ish and malicious...

Epic job, as usual!
xybolic chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Loved this. Even though it was really dark and creepy and disturbing and freaky. From all the vampire reference, I guess it's not that farfetched to portray him as an incubus. ;D
Forever Day chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
You did the whole dark feel very well (I certainly came off with shivers up my spine) and it's nice to see Artemis being taken back to his evil-er roots. But it's also freaky. Makes me wonder. . .
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
m... would you mind terribly giving a backstory to when this first started?

brittney
12D3 Gorillaz chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
so... artemis turned into an incubus while i wasn't watching? amazing what puberty can do to you. :P
xWei chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
its OK though like u said..a bit dark...

not very keen on the dark...but great never the less xD
Ciel In A Dress chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
You were right. It was dark. Very dark. But I liked it.
The One Called Demetra chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Best Vampire!Artemis fic ever. Period.
AnihyrMoonstar chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
I like the perspective on this. It's a good way to see it in stages, keep it a story, and yet, add a few interesting little insights of its own. Also, just the formatting in general of it was refreshing. It wasn't just Chix telling it straight off the bat; the wording gave it that "interview" feel, but without the other half of the conversation, it still stayed semi - mm - personal, I guess.

The idea is also intriguing. I'm torn between thinking that many times, yes, (especially early on) Artemis could fit into that almost surreal/inhuman/other-worldly category - the detachment/smugness in an awful situation in particular. On the other hand, though, it's just so...sexual. Now, I'm almost positive Artemis will grow into / is growing into a more sexually aware character. But the thought that all this time...? Well, perhaps something happened to him. You certainly wrote it off with style, in any case; very well-handled. :P

Moonstar
abcdefg8EN chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Oh, I get why you put that this fic was dark, now...

Still, WOW. I can kinda imagine Artemis as an incubus, what with his ability to be deadly and charming and all that.

Also, leave Chix the hell alone! First you blow off his head, then you traumatise him for life!
HappyGoMe chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
dude, NO!

I'm just kidding. BUT SERIOUSLY?

This was very brave of you. I was very interested until the yucky Artemis-is-a-creep part. Yucky. But good job! Well written, no grammar errors...just really really scary.
Wind chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
... wow rly? that's so random! interesting as it is, it's still random... but still, its cool
hijinklum chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Well, err, WHOA! scary! im really rather glad that i wasnt reading this late at night(which i have an annoying habit of doing- i read the freaky stories at night, then jump at every noise!)

well, it wasnt really SCARY, but it was chilling.

poor Holly, being reduced to skin and bones...

I must say, in the midst of this, i had a funny thought- how odd would it look, Chix, Holly and Vinyaya all wrapped up in blankets with the heat going... o.O- they'd just be a big puffy ball! i know, its a weird thought, but whatever...

Shadow-KissedKK
The Creatress chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
:O... Oh, yeah, that was dark. I liked the way you wrote it, through Chix's POV. ... But wow, that was dark. ... And dark's the way I like it. ;)
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