|Reviews for Master of Discipline: Watch the World Burn|
| Seto-fan1 chapter 1 . 10/24
I know its been years, but have you ever given thought to writing a sequel to this alternate ending? I'd love to read a post apocalyptic story about the God-Empress Karasuba.
Also have you made any progress on your story The Vampire Ria?
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 7/22
| Godric Kharg chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Not near as nice as the official ending. Entertaining none-the-less! A very good read!
| misterfn chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
It's a real love story. I love it
| vienx.001 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
wowwwww so saddd miyaaaaaaa,,,,
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Cool in a sadistic sort of way. Interesting take on the end of Master of Discipline.
| BearLeCubby chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I wonder hm,did they have sex while the world was burning?
If they did was it rough? LMFAO
Still did they?
| Kylerocks01 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Bloody hell, you really know how to write either sad or bitter-sweet endings.
| Nora Anak chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Even though minato pretty much doomed the world by not killing karasuba, I find it romantic that he chose her over the world... In a twisted sense.
| Yu Narukami P4 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
i'm sweating like hell reading this! fiuh, your sekirei fanfic never failed to impress me. i like it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
you are fucking amzing
| Ronniemac28 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
| Tomon chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
You really processed well this eventuality. I think that one of the main point of stopping Karasuba in your "canon" story was that he was afraid for his other sekirei so if she agreed to keep them alive... Well, there are still some 6 billions human but who care? xD
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
un poco tetrico pero genial
| Astray71 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
This ending is (imo) much better! the other was kinda iffy because it was climax like and it just kind of died at the end where this once keeps it going