Reviews for Liar
MartyMc49 chapter 5 . 4/2/2015
I return to your Red John/Jane story. Not sure why. I've probably read this a dozen times. Maybe it's the intensity... whatever it is - it works. You can see the emotions on Rigsby's face and feel the tense set of Cho's shoulders. Grace is wonderful, whereas Lisbon's feelings are so raw she comes across as a wreck instead of being completely in control of herself as she usually is. I relate to Nurse Sam and hate the doctor. Then there is the hero of your story, Patrick Jane, certainly beaten but incredibly still able to cope. Able to give a very good description of his abuser Red John, and able to comfort Sam Bernard when Lisbon loses her cool. Bravo for a story well thought out and well written!
T chapter 5 . 3/4/2015
short but interesting. hope you will one day continue.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/26/2015
I like it because it's elaborated and well thought-out work. I think it's better than many other stories I've read so far. I'd love to read a new chapter of this.

PD: I'm learning English. Hope everything is understandable. So don't be too harsh!
Lexikal chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Utterly amazing first chapter. The show makes Red John seem almost charming; your RJ is much darker and doesn't appeal to me at all, he disgusts me on a profound level and it is hard to write a character like that (I know). I could see this scene only too well. The bleach was a nice touch, Jane analyzing the room, the mention of the 12 tribes, 12 names of Surya, etc was a very effective touch to show just how obsessive a panicking Jane's mind can become. I believe Jane would act exactly like this if he were "real", and your RJ disgusts me on a profound level, ranking up there with the character of Dr. Heiter from "The Human Centipede" in terms of his ability to make me shudder. Excellent work.
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Powerful, depraved, wrenching, excruciating. Redundant to say, but well written.
mrs.sastre chapter 5 . 8/30/2013
Puleeaasee finish this story! ! !

Your writing is amazing and the premise, although deeply dark, is fascinating.

Don't leave your fans hanging!
mangalover123blue chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
HarlesAugust chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
YaoiIsMyDrug.23 chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
poor jane :'(
Lena chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Wow. Hands down the best Mentalist fic I've read on this site. Brilliantly executed. I imagine Patrick Jane to be a tricky character to write, but you've definitely nailed him - right from the mannerisms to the way he processes. I love that with the simplest of words you can create the most intense sensory all felt so tangible...from the environment to the interactions...I felt like I was right there...which was both freaky and engaging. That's testament to your skills as a writer. Thank you for taking the time to write this fic and for keeping the characters 'in character'. As sadistic as I feel for saying this, it was a pleasure and a relief to read a fic that deals with such a heart-rendering and horrific topic without being grotesquely lewd or using excessive have some fantastic writing skills. Kudos to you! _ Look forward to reading more of your work! _
IceCreamDoodle13 chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
I'm incredibly impressed by the standard of your writing. The things that stood out the most for me personally were Rigsby finding and comforting Jane, and Jane's brief interactions with the nurse. You seem to have an excellent grasp on the characters and I very much enjoy the way you write them. Off to read your other fics now, thank you for a great read.
aku no tensai chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
GREAT story! Aww~ I feel so sorry for Jane though (he's such a devious cutie.)

Umm~ I think you might've missed writing a part in chapter 5 though. It's in between the part where Rigsby is talking with Jane after the doctor left, and when Cho comes in?

criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 7/29/2011

*scrubs at eyes*

Holy frak. That was an epic first chapter! I can hardly bring myself to stop and take the time to review, but I feel wrong not doing so, especially one that was so incredibly well written and engaging and... there are just not enough adjectives to describe it ;)

I only recently fell into "The Mentalist" and usually, I write solely for "Criminal Minds" but the show sucked me right in and Patrick (though horribly, horribly, gruesomely tortured) was incredibly in-character, I truly applaud your wonderful writing skills and characterization. This is an amazing start to what I am sure will be an amazing story!

Tony-In-Distress chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
gah! what? got to the end and saw that it just cuts off at a cliff hanger? nooo! please continue this! it's amazing...and i hope my review shows you that people still read it. _ you have all the characters IN character which is quite hard to do, especially with Jane and Cho but you did it...! please continue
Marluciel chapter 5 . 6/30/2011
This is utterly fascinating. I do enjoy your portrayal of the characters. I can't wait for the next update! I'm hooked. :D
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