Reviews for Marco
theharrypotterworld chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
That was really well written :) You need to update soon!
Alice chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
This was written well but there are a couple of typos don't worry I make some too. is there a book about Marco in the elyon series?
Kii chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Hi

Okay I really liked it and I would really like you to continue so.

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

Kii-Bye
silverspigot chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
aw, it's cute!
music4evah chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Haha, that was fun to read this from Marco's point of view, already knowing everything from Alexa's.

Unfortunately, you had quite a few typos. For instance, you wrote 'while' instead of 'wild', and you wrote 'quite' instead of 'quiet'. Those were just a couple. You had more then that. But it's ok! Everyone gets typos. Unless they edit so stinking much that there are none...Which I haven't done yet...[she said sheepsishly.]

Are you going to continue this? Well, what I mean to say is, are you going to write about what happens after? (Well, what YOU think happens afterwards.) Are you? Are you? Are you? Are you? ARE YOU?
emily chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
wow i loved it but i want there to be more of the storie and alexa and marco should be more like together...3 u know...