|Reviews for Demon|
| natysc chapter 33 . 3/8
Thank you for this amazing story.
| ckatherine chapter 33 . 2/22
I read the whole story and I just want to say that i love how the plot abd charcter developed through out the story!l love how you tied up the loose ends
| Angelica chibilua chapter 33 . 1/9
i loved everything about this fanfiction
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS
| Yorushike chapter 33 . 11/12/2013
Hi, a beautifully written story, that feels very alive. I love your portray of Kaoru as well. Though, because of the AU situation and her past in this story, slightly out of character she is amazingly strong an it is easy to understand, why Kenshin became so fascinated with her. The only thing that I did not find quite realistic, is how quickly Kaoru came to enjoy a mans attention. You said at one point in the story, that she knew that not all men were bad and that sex was supposed to be enjoyable, but though she might have remembered her dad enough to know that not all men are bad how did she know about women liking sex when her only positive examples of such things died before her puberty? Even more so I find it hard to believe that a woman, that was raped several times, would not be reminded of the unpleasentnes of her past experiences, when a man starts making advances on her as quickly progressing as Kenshin's. After all in this one scene she had to fight with herself not to struggle against him, but suddenly she starts liking it? I would have tried giving her more time, maybe getting her used to casual toutches and kissing first and then slowly going futher when he had her full (not forced because of a debt) consent.
Still a wonderful and truly great story though. One more thing are your scenes of buying clothes. Kimono are not fitted. They are always the same size (except for children). The Obi is used to ajust length and tightness when putting a Kimono on :).
| Asian Delicacy chapter 33 . 11/10/2013
I read this story a few years ago and had forgotten about it. I was fortunate to find it again. It's a very beautiful story and I'm absolutely in love with the interactions between Kaoru and Kenshin. Their love was raw, romantic, beautiful and real. I'm die hard Kaoru/Kenshin fan but this pairing is a rare find on this site nowadays. Thanks for gifting new with this slice of heaven. Don't know if you're still writing Kenshin fics but just wanted to let you know, you've done a spectacular job.
| Lila Paige Rose chapter 32 . 8/29/2013
I love it! I hope you don't ever stop writing for the RK fandom because LORD ALMIGHTY, it needs more fiction. A decade of reading fiction will not be enough to erase that disaster they called 'OVA'. :*
| PrincessOfReading chapter 33 . 8/26/2013
I LOVE IT! SO CUTE! I could not stop reading till it was done! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! You portrayed the actions speak louder than words phrase soooo well in this story. Thank you for your contribution to my imagination!
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/10/2013
I really enjoy reading your work! I have read this fanfic (Demon) three different times and I still find myself loving your character devolpment and plot line. I don't usually stay interested in fics with too many chapters, but you seem to have a knack for keeping the reader interested from start to finish. Great job!
| Caeria chapter 33 . 8/3/2013
I don't often read AU stories, but I'm delighted that I took a chance with this one. Thank you for keeping me entertained on a rainy Saturday afternoon.
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2013
Kenshin is really reminding me of Seshomoru from Inuyasha, only without a Jaken to do the dirty work (i.e. actually show some care).
Anyways, really enjoying the story!
| Katara-Hatake chapter 33 . 6/21/2013
| Katara-Hatake chapter 28 . 6/21/2013
Somehow this didn't surprise me. Their relationship is really dodgy.
| Katara-Hatake chapter 27 . 6/21/2013
Please tell me they actually get married & she's right. I can't bear with so much embarrassment if she's wrong _
| eirame chapter 33 . 5/30/2013
Thank you for sharing this story and may you never lack inspiration.
| Hallolo chapter 33 . 5/22/2013
I don't really know what to say... This story is way too great not to deserve a review from all its readers, yet it is so amazing that I don't really know how to say it. I can only say thank you for writing this, it is definitely one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! I really love Kenshin how you describe him, and somehow it doesn't feel OOC even though it is very different from our rurouni :)
Thank you again, never give up writing, you have a gift for it!