Reviews for Naughty Secrets |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. I have to say this is my new favorite Bella/ Edward story. It was great. I love that I thought that Wolf Boy was Jacob the whole time and it ended up being Paul. You kept me in my toes the whole time and the lemons where so hot I need a cigarette, and I don’t smoke. You are awesome. Thank you for such a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I did not see that coming. That explains why she didn’t recognize the man on the stairs. Wow this really took me by surprise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jacob is bat shit crazy. Lol that was pretty clever how you incorporated the wolf pack into the story line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its settled then, happily newlyweds! Now how about them parents... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit is right! Hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() A resolution. Like the dual performances! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe shot, it's about to go down! Loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant believe he acted that way! So happy Bella punched that face! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great, she is confident enough to not go chasing and not to be shut up in her room. Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yes, been waiting for this union! Thanks, hotter than imagined. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know now, that you might of been one of the writer's who stopped mid story because of feed back. I leave reviews, but am one who feel stupid leaving reviews after reviews that just say awesome. So I only review oh so often. But your a/n got to me. Even if its 'awesome', I will review. This is my first story of yours, and went in knowing unfinished, but your idea/story line intrigued me. So, thank you. I enjoy what I have read so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was scorching hot and great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit is correct |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say it was great that Charlie threw back in Bella's face all the things he didn't like that she had done and said nothing. Then got up and walked out. It was even better that Sue dragged Charlie's ass back to Bella and Edward's and invited her kids, to hash it out right there and then. All kids but Seth being in on the white ass joke, was funny. That part when Kate said she wished she had taken a ride on Edward when she had the chance, was absolutely hilarious. I seriously laughed so hard. Especially because it was EPOV and he was the one narrating that. It was also funny that their romp on their webcam, came through Jasper's TV. Whoops! I loved this epilogue. So hot and sexy. Funny and loving. And, Marissa at the end there. Very wonderful story that I very much loved. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy |